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Winter wrinkles, showing the signs of age, but under all that snow, it's tough to gauge. Although Spring showers are mostly sprinkles, showing the signs of age, Winter wrinkles. Robin Red-Breasts arrive ahead of Spring to celebrate the warmth that She will bring. And spreading the word that Nature's alive; ahead of Spring, Robin Red-Breasts arrive. Trilliums sprout within forest cutbacks as the river ice buckles, forming packs. And as Winter wrinkles, looking worn out; within forest cutbacks, trilliums sprout. No longer white, Winter's a shade of grey, Her crystalline beauty fading away. And now, under the sun's extended light, Winter's a shade of grey, no longer white. Waiting in the wings, there's a feisty Spring with snowdrop flowers pulling Her heartstrings. As melting icicles give up their bling waiting in the wings, there's a feisty Spring.

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Date: 3/22/2019 10:34:00 PM
I love this! It is so clever and I especially like the last line about "feisty Spring waiting in the wings".
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/23/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Carole, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/21/2019 10:48:00 AM
this is very good, Ive not heard of this form.. tricky! BG
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Date: 3/21/2019 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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