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oh tell me what's this ruse, my little friend? proud petals spread and reaching for the sun did you not think that you should be undone by all the winter white the heavens send? I wonder, can you wriggle rooty toes dug deep beneath the frozen permafrost? and what will your proud exhibition cost when that chill winter mistral lastly blows? I think, perhaps, you're quite a bit like me not satisfied with summer's briefer tides how quickly all that magic came and died not ready yet, to set those passions free so, know our meeting isn't just by chance ‘twas no mistake you blossom in the cold you've given me a message, rich as gold to make the most of every circumstance for life's the grandest miracle, indeed - and you are far too charmed … to go to seed. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Early November 2018 Any Form Or None" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Seasonal Or Unseasonal" Poetry Contest, Kim Rodrigues, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 11/12/2018 10:46:00 AM
Hi Gregory, dropping by with my congratulations on a well deserved win in the contest. Have a wonderful Monday....Mike.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 8:22:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Mike - blessings! :-)
Date: 11/10/2018 4:16:00 PM
Congrats, Gregory, on your well deserved podium finish.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 8:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line! PLEASE accept my apologies for not thanking you properly until now, I am so far behind on things. Blessings to you for a happy holiday, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/10/2018 3:54:00 PM
A lovely write, Greg! Love your wording in the final line! Congratulations on your second place win! <3 Kim
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 8:20:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Kim, I thank you so very much! PLEASE accept my apologies for not thanking you properly until now, I am so far behind on things. Blessings to you for a happy holiday, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/10/2018 3:50:00 PM
I love your conversation with a winter flower —your only company in the long, cold months! A beautiful poem, and I especially enjoyed the unique rhyme scheme! Congrats on your win! ~Cindi
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 8:20:00 PM
What a sweet comment this is, Cindi, and I thank you so much for your comments! PLEASE accept my apologies for not thanking you properly until now, I am so far behind on things. Blessings to you for a happy holiday, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/10/2018 3:47:00 PM
I am not surprised to see this beauty in second Place Greg. It is very deserving of the honor! Congratulations! ; )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you again, Connie, that's very kind of you!
Date: 11/10/2018 2:04:00 PM
Congrats!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you, Alycia! PLEASE accept my apologies for not thanking you properly until now, I am so far behind on things. Blessings to you for a happy holiday, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/5/2018 3:19:00 PM
Greg, how delightfully you convey the powerful perseverance of nature in this exquisite poem that sends an uplifting message to all of us! Congrats on your fine placement, and best wishes for Kim's contest. Fav! Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 8:18:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Sandra, and I'm pleased that you found this worthy of comment! PLEASE accept my apologies for not thanking you properly until now, I am so far behind on things. Blessings to you for a happy holiday, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/5/2018 3:10:00 PM
You are so in tune with nature Greg. Your love of it shines in this lovely winning piece! Congratulations on your top win in Brian's contest my friend! xxoo : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 8:18:00 PM
You are very kind, Connie, and I'm so pleased you liked my poem! PLEASE accept my apologies for not thanking you properly until now, I am so far behind on things. Blessings to you for a happy holiday, my friend! :-) <3

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