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Winter Walk

That the waves and rocks find voice here in the howl of winter, is because I have come to listen and to be in the loneliness of this place. Only the seagulls are here with me and hang in the tumult, taunting the wind. Deep in this solitude is the thought of a drowned youth, swept away and lost to the silence sunk far below the furious sounds that headstone his name. I am the last to remember him and reach down, but he is now beyond my grasp. I have let him go. I feel the sting of the salty air on my face, the cold leaching through this old coat and my unsteady feet stumbling to find balance on this rubbly ground. The air shudders with the crash of nearby breakers. I cling desperately to the sound.

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Date: 4/4/2023 2:17:00 PM
I'm not sure if the middle stanza is something you witnessed or a metaphor. I hope neither to be honest. As much as I love a stormy sea and the idea of not sharing it, this seems a sad day rather than a cleansing one.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/4/2023 3:06:00 PM
Refers to the death of my uncle who sadly drowned at 21. Had quite an impact on my young mind. I,m afraid this poem reflects a rather dark mood. Poetry sometimes takes you into these places, part of being the voice of the "whole" person. Thanks for entering this zone by reading and reflecting on the poem. Valued.
Date: 9/2/2022 4:45:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderfully wild and healing place. SuZ
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