Winter Waits

Last spring arrived with soft cocoon
I dreamed that love would visit soon.
The butterfly that graced my arm
soon flew – she thought I meant her harm.
I couldn’t chase her, but I knew
she would return if love is true.
My summer passed and autumn then,
Now winter waits for spring again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 4/26/2020 4:13:00 PM
another congrats upon thee, sir Poet! THis one has served you really well in the past too. So glad it scored well with Brian. I love it as well.
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John Watt
Date: 4/26/2020 5:37:00 PM
Milady doth serve me well with thy Shakespearean dialect and congratulatory bequest. Nor it nor no remembrance what it was (huh?) Thank you for the treasure of thy words!
Date: 4/25/2020 4:56:00 PM
Lovely and poignant, John. You effortlessly moved us through the seasons then left us with hope personified! Congrats on your win, my friend! The diamond awaits for spring!
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Date: 4/26/2020 1:54:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated feedback and your ongoing poetry friendship, Sam. Always uplifted by your thoughtful comments.
Date: 1/18/2020 6:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win here. I really liked how you had done yours, John.
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John Watt
Date: 1/18/2020 11:06:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. I appreciate the second visit ~ J
Date: 1/16/2020 10:15:00 PM
Beautiful verse, John, congratulations your win. Eve
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John Watt
Date: 1/16/2020 10:59:00 PM
Eve, thanks for dropping in and leaving behind your kind words ~ John
Date: 1/16/2020 6:37:00 PM
Tenderly penned, my friend! Congrats to you! Best of everything, Gershon
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John Watt
Date: 1/16/2020 7:46:00 PM
Sincere thanks to you for the visit, and congrats to you as well for 'She Dainty Stepped'!
Date: 1/16/2020 5:57:00 PM
Exquisite and so romantic John! I really love this entry. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving first placement!xxoo
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John Watt
Date: 1/16/2020 7:48:00 PM
Connie, thank you for your poetry friendship and your uplifting words. Hugs ~ John
Date: 1/16/2020 10:13:00 AM
this is beautiful and very worthy of its win...nicely done John :)
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John Watt
Date: 1/16/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Sandra. You are much appreciated. Hugs ~ John
Date: 1/16/2020 7:30:00 AM
John, this is so well written and like Andrea said "very enchanting" Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie
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John Watt
Date: 1/16/2020 11:47:00 AM
Charlie, thank you for sponsoring and taking the time to read and evaluate all those wonderful Lay poems. I appreciated the challenge to try something new, and am honored by your placement and kind words. Blessings to you ~ John
Date: 1/2/2020 8:32:00 PM
That is very well written and an enchanting little Lay poem. I have one to post but it's not up yet. So many more poems to write. Ay!!!
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John Watt
Date: 1/2/2020 11:31:00 PM
Thanks! You've been productive this new year, can't wait to read yours.
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