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Winter Waits

The breeze blows icy arrows, piercing flesh The pale sun's rays enfeeble yearning hearts Commuters scurry, hats in scarves enmeshed Monday morning, December's forlorn start... Returning home, the winds do scream and howl At downtown throngs that empty out at five But first a drink to wipe away the scowl That makes a face look deader than alive... Back home again with family so warm All sitting by the fire, in cuddling arms Protected from the reach of winter's storm Soon dreaming dreams, not fearing any harm Though outside Winter waits with open arms To hug brave fools who tempt December's charms

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Date: 12/17/2019 5:19:00 PM
Your imagery is captivating, my poetic genius friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/17/2019 5:37:00 PM
What can I say. Somehow I don't think Einstein's got much to worry about. LOL. Thank you for the nice compliment, Caren! :) gw
Date: 12/17/2019 12:16:00 AM
Hello Gershon … reading your winter sonnet should make me feel smug down here, but 40C on Friday means I'll be sizzling here - Merry Christmas Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/17/2019 5:38:00 PM
40 degrees Centigrade. Gasp. Must be H on earth down there right now. Hang in there, Lindsay! :) gw
Date: 12/16/2019 8:17:00 PM
Love this, Gershon. Absolutely delightful.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/16/2019 8:59:00 PM
Thank you for an extra-lovely comment, my dear friend. Happy and Safe Winter! :) gw
Date: 12/16/2019 3:57:00 PM
nicely done, gershon! you've captured winter so well in this poem...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/16/2019 5:39:00 PM
Thanks, ilene. And now that I've captured winter, can I hurl it way far away?! Peace and Joy, Gershon
Date: 12/16/2019 3:45:00 PM
Wonderful poem. Winter happens whether you like it or not, just be smart when venturing out. :)~
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/16/2019 5:37:00 PM
Yup! Those storms can ground a person! :) gw
Date: 12/16/2019 1:35:00 PM
Cool sonnet, hm, literally. The couplet is just epic picturesque and poetic precision.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/16/2019 2:26:00 PM
Wow. I don't get compliments like this one every day. Thank YOU so much! Peace and Joy, Gershon

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