WINTER TREMBLES

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winter's fist slams frozen earth.
frozen thunder trembles through
the bones of the oaks and pines.
night cracks like thin ice.

12th gradestormwinterdodoitsu

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Line Gauthier

December 6, 2025 at 6:03 PM

powerful imagery ~ you might want to consider not repeating 'frozen'.

Paige Hind

November 30, 2025 at 12:48 AM

Beautiful. <3

Sotto Poet

November 29, 2025 at 8:41 AM

A very descriptive and powerful poem about winter hurricanes and tempest. With great metaphor layers and personalization you make the season speak with cracking effects.

Sara Kendrick

November 29, 2025 at 4:58 AM

Whoa!! Looks like a frozen scary place. I have heard of snow thunder or something like that. I would think that it would sound even louder and more terrifying. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I like it. Sara K

Valsa George

November 29, 2025 at 12:11 AM

Such powerful lines on the fierce bombard of winter that earth lies with cracks of ice. Well done dear friend.

Joe Maverick

November 28, 2025 at 10:30 PM

Cracking descriptions Sara.' You Broke through to me anyway.'

Yann Rolland

November 28, 2025 at 9:56 PM

pretty emotional ad cute poetry, enjoyed have a nice week end

William Kelii Kekaula

November 28, 2025 at 8:28 PM

A powerful, descriptive passage that evokes the harshness of a winter storm through personification and sensory imagery that cracks the night and affects the trees.