Joanna Daniel Poet Sedoka

Winter Throes - Ws

in cold winter throes
city has frosted over ~
light shimmers on pristine snow 

parka covered kids
toss snowballs at each other ~
living within a snow globe



9th January 2023




For Charles Messina's "Winter Sedoka" contest

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Sara Kendrick January 26, 2023 at 6:17 AM I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2023 at 1:16 PM SO cute!! Big congrats, Jo

Linda Alice Fowler January 25, 2023 at 7:08 AM Congratulations on your win Jo! :)

Charles Messina January 25, 2023 at 5:46 AM Simply lovely, Jo. I loved this! Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. Hugs Charlie

Michelle Faulkner January 13, 2023 at 7:49 PM Very picturesque, Jo, it does remind me of a snowglobe! Best wishes for the contest~

W J Clarke January 12, 2023 at 2:05 PM Really lovely Jo! I really like the last line "living in a snowball".

FJ Thomas January 9, 2023 at 12:32 PM Nice Jo! I especially like how the final line in the second katauta encompasses the whole first. And thank you for commenting on mine, I wasn't happy with it so I removed it this morning. Still working on my Winter sedoka!

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2023 at 9:59 AM This is so charming

Vijay Pandit January 9, 2023 at 5:12 AM Wonderful images you convey throughout, Jo. I like the turn your poem takes towards the ending line. Best to you.

Tom Cunningham January 9, 2023 at 2:57 AM Love your winter imagery Jo, good luck in the contest and enjoy your week ahead. Tom