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Tableau contest Sponsored by Joseph May
08/17/23

Winter Tableau

These snowflake flurries
will never stop us
finding tasty treats
A full birdfeeder
looks so appealing - 
al fresco dining!

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Sam Kauffman

August 29, 2023 at 10:58 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win! "Al fresco dining" indeed. Your delightful sense of humor just can't be repressed even in the depths winter! I also love the sense of caring and compassion for the smallest of creations! Wonderful metaphor! Blessings and a hug my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 21, 2023 at 3:04 AM

- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Jan :) - hugs

Mark Toney

August 20, 2023 at 9:17 PM

Returning to say congratulations on your win, Jan!

Kim Merryman

August 20, 2023 at 3:53 PM

Love the personification, Jan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

August 20, 2023 at 12:34 PM

Congrats on your win Jan, Lovely write

Kim Rodrigues

August 20, 2023 at 10:57 AM

Al fresco dining! Love that! Congratulations, Jan!

Lin Lane

August 19, 2023 at 2:42 AM

Jan, your Tableau is so appropriately written for the beautiful winter scene. Love the al fresco line... And not one word about bird droppings.

Mark Toney

August 18, 2023 at 10:00 PM

Jan what a delightful, happy poem. Best wishes on the contest!

Paul Callus

August 18, 2023 at 2:36 PM

A most fitting winter tableau with a very good final line, Jan. Regards & Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

August 18, 2023 at 2:37 PM

Thanks Paul, that's my fave line, hope you had a lovely holiday with the family xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

August 17, 2023 at 11:42 PM

Exceptional, Jan:)

Jan Allison

August 18, 2023 at 2:37 PM

Thanks Joanna:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

August 17, 2023 at 8:59 PM

Al fresco dining at its finest, very clever, best of luck in the contest, Jan~

Jan Allison

August 18, 2023 at 2:37 PM

I couldnt resist that final line Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Akkina Downing

August 17, 2023 at 7:16 PM

Hunger will push you to do anything, anywhere, anytime. Beautiful, Jan :) xo

Jan Allison

August 18, 2023 at 2:36 PM

Thanks Akkina:-) hugs Jan xx

Jerry Brotherton

August 17, 2023 at 6:16 PM

A lovely poem Jan. I have 4 bird feeders out to help my feathered friend through the tough winter months. Right now, the hummingbirds are emptying my feeders every day.

Jan Allison

August 18, 2023 at 2:36 PM

oh i would love to see hummingbirds for real one day