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Tableau contest Sponsored by Joseph May
08/17/23

These snowflake flurries will never stop us finding tasty treats A full birdfeeder looks so appealing - al fresco dining! Image 2

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/29/2023 10:58:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win! "Al fresco dining" indeed. Your delightful sense of humor just can't be repressed even in the depths winter! I also love the sense of caring and compassion for the smallest of creations! Wonderful metaphor! Blessings and a hug my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2023 3:04:00 AM

- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Jan :) - hugs

Mark Toney

Date: 8/20/2023 9:17:00 PM

Returning to say congratulations on your win, Jan!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/20/2023 3:53:00 PM

Love the personification, Jan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2023 12:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan, Lovely write

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2023 10:57:00 AM

Al fresco dining! Love that! Congratulations, Jan!

Lin Lane

Date: 8/19/2023 2:42:00 AM

Jan, your Tableau is so appropriately written for the beautiful winter scene. Love the al fresco line... And not one word about bird droppings.

Mark Toney

Date: 8/18/2023 10:00:00 PM

Jan what a delightful, happy poem. Best wishes on the contest!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/18/2023 2:36:00 PM

A most fitting winter tableau with a very good final line, Jan. Regards & Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2023 2:37:00 PM

Thanks Paul, that's my fave line, hope you had a lovely holiday with the family xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/17/2023 11:42:00 PM

Exceptional, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2023 2:37:00 PM

Thanks Joanna:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/17/2023 8:59:00 PM

Al fresco dining at its finest, very clever, best of luck in the contest, Jan~

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2023 2:37:00 PM

I couldnt resist that final line Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/17/2023 7:16:00 PM

Hunger will push you to do anything, anywhere, anytime. Beautiful, Jan :) xo

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2023 2:36:00 PM

Thanks Akkina:-) hugs Jan xx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/17/2023 6:16:00 PM

A lovely poem Jan. I have 4 bird feeders out to help my feathered friend through the tough winter months. Right now, the hummingbirds are emptying my feeders every day.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2023 2:36:00 PM

oh i would love to see hummingbirds for real one day