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Winter Sunshine

I sit by my window with coffee in hand Surveying the beauty of this frosty morn. A diamond-like sparkle covers the land. Drab earth no longer looks forlorn. In the winter's sunshine, it's beauty is reborn.

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Date: 1/11/2011 10:29:00 PM
I like the scenery myself, as long as I see it from the inside where it is a lot warmer. Good way to describe everything.
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Date: 11/13/2010 6:10:00 PM
The frost looks so beautiful, it's like viewing a diamond sparkled surface. Ooo I like that window >> James :)
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:50:00 AM
When the landscape gets that frosty sparkle, it looks like a winter wonderland. How nice it must be to look out upon such beauty as you have your morning coffee, Francine! Terrific tanka, birthday mate. Love, Carolyn
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