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perches low enough and bides an early farewell~ the sun in winter

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2023 4:43:00 AM

Way to go with this winter winner in Tania's contest. Congratulations to you. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 11:59:00 AM

Nice especially with the picture. Congrats

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/24/2023 12:49:00 PM

Lasaad, congratulations on your winning placement, seeing the sun in the wintertime is a welcoming sight.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/24/2023 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Winter Sun" is a beautiful Haiku write/pretty picture. Merry Christmas...........

Paige Hind

Date: 12/16/2023 1:24:00 PM

Unusual and original, Sotto! I loved reading this!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/13/2023 12:31:00 PM

- Lovely winter haiku, Las :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/12/2023 7:11:00 PM

A very nice feel resonates, Lasaad. Heart-warming, pun intended, my friend. Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2023 4:33:00 PM

I really like this. You did sun and I did moon!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 12/12/2023 3:42:00 PM

Yes Sotto, the sun in winter wakes up early and goes bed too soon. Most of times we don't have its smile at all. Difficult to see its light and feel its warmth. Wise written haiku. Have a nice evening

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/12/2023 2:31:00 PM

The angle in winter is so interesting for sure. I love a sunny winter afternoon because the angle is perfect. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/11/2023 7:41:00 PM

Indeed, the shine in your golden pen makes up for dull sun, my friend. A brilliant Haiku, Lasaad, that captures the lazy distant daylight of the winter season. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Karen Jones

Date: 12/11/2023 5:39:00 PM

Lovely haiku and beautiful picture!

Tom Woody

Date: 12/11/2023 3:30:00 PM

Too early for my taste. Can't wait till it stays sunny till 9pm again. Nice haiku O Sottomyer

Silent One

Date: 12/11/2023 1:11:00 PM

Absolutely stunning imagery in your tender haiku... a wonderful choice of words add depth to it..