Winter Stream
The willows have wept
Lancet leaves, tears in the creek
Dream in their prison of ice.
White sycamore roots,
Twisted and gnarled, form islands
And pools, a necklace of pearls.
The stream disappears –
Magic of karst – to emerge
Down valley, unexpected.
December 31, 2016
For contest: Form C
Sponsored by Broken Wings
5th place
The most intricate Japanese Poetry form is the Choka, or Long Poem.
The early form consisted of a series of Katuata joined together.
This gives a choice of form structures of ..... 5 - 7 - 7 - 5 - 7 - 7
.. etc, or .. 5 - 7 - 5 - 5 - 7 - 5.. etc.
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