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Winter Storm

Deep white fluffy flakes** ** * on a downward spiral fall* * * * spitting cold icy pellets * as the storm crept in * * * increasing in speed * * * whistling around corners * ** blinding eyesight * * * * creating a whirlwind * * * * of white rotating fluff * * * * those brave enough * * ** ** to face the outdoors * * * ** were bombarded by ** * ** * frigid darting weaponry. *

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Date: 5/5/2020 1:52:00 PM
beautifully creative; thanks Phyllis. shalom/Peace & Health
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/7/2020 11:49:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem. love phyl
Date: 5/4/2020 12:02:00 PM
This is a fabulous poem. Very creative.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/7/2020 11:50:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Date: 3/10/2019 12:42:00 PM
great descriptive poetry! I hear this happened a lot up north this year!!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/17/2019 12:53:00 PM
Yes we had a very rough winter and the coldest Feb. in 83 years. love phyl
Date: 2/1/2019 2:59:00 PM
- Stay inside in front of the fireplace, Phyllis :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/5/2019 11:27:00 AM
Thanks we are still in a deep cold spell and nice to stay indoors. love phyl
Date: 1/27/2019 7:02:00 PM
Awesome poem, Phyllis. Well done.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/5/2019 11:27:00 AM
Thanks for our comment as we are still in the grips of winter. love phyl
Date: 1/27/2019 5:20:00 PM
G'day Phyllis … A nice picture poem about what I was pleading for on Friday. I think the sun snuck down and rested in our back yard although we didn't make 110F like many others - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/5/2019 11:29:00 AM
The highs and lows of weather I guess. We are colder than the deep freeze and your are hot enough to fry eggs on a stone lol. Stay cool. love phyl

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