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Cupid’s Winter sport his spanking new quiver’s full his aim’s a bit low Miss Mary’d be happy with dough but shot by a bum with a bow. She married a poor man, scrubs his dirt floor, because of one single arrow. If Cupid puts his quiver away, then who’s to blame for poor choices? 1/31/2022 Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/16/2022 7:30:00 PM

Hi Kim, sorry it took so long to comment on this brilliant and fun write. Loved the Limerick! My belated Congrats on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2022 4:24:00 AM

I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara..Sad...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/11/2022 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write and picture. Got to Love that Cupid. Have a blessed day.......................

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/11/2022 8:08:00 AM

Good one Kim! Congratulations

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/11/2022 7:52:00 AM

Hilarious and true! Intriguing - who is to blame for Mary's fate? Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/11/2022 4:57:00 AM

Interesting and hilarious. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2022 4:33:00 PM

Darn Cupid can't shoot straight. Must be drunk to get warm. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2022 5:11:00 PM

LOL! Right!?

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/31/2022 3:30:00 PM

Just blame Trump...why not? He gets blamed by Lame-stream, state influenced, media for everything else:) Well said. Most of what happens to us, when it comes to matters of the heart, is due to personal choices. Even the best people though, are fooled once in awhile. Some soulless creeps are really deceptive. They have the upper advantage in the sense that normal minds refuse to consider such evil even exists.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2022 5:12:00 PM

I know what you mean! I had to listen to grand jury cases for 3 months. The underbelly of wickedness!