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Winter Sparrows

Outside my window I heard a chirping, And on a tree was one little sparrow; This bird had not a care for snow falling. Often many perch on a branch narrow, I find their nests in walls and in vines; And on a tree was one little sparrow. Even in light fixtures I find signs, So closely entwined in my daily life; I find their nests in walls and in vines. These sparrows enjoy a city birdlife, I love to watch them have a snow bath; So closely entwined in my daily life. They hop, hop on my icy garden path, Sparrows will eat right out of my hand; I love to watch them have a snow bath. I find this little bird so delightfully grand, Outside my window I heard a chirping; Sparrows will eat right out of my hand. This bird has not a care for snow falling ________________________ November 28, 2015 Poetry/Terzanelle/Winter Sparrows Copyright Protected, ID 15-730-421-0 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance L France Submitted to the contest, Strand Pick F sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place ________________________________ Written for the Open Poetry contest sponsor, Charlotte Puddifoot Fifth Place
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Kauffman Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 10:40 AM
Constance, you brought me into your picture window to enjoy this little bird. I like the format for the poem - terzanelle - really gives the poem a nice movement and flow! Congratulations!
La France Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 10:27 AM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations and the nice comment on my poem, appreciate a lot _Constance
A  Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 11:20 PM
Sweet win. Love SKAT
La France Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Thank you Skat
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 6:57 PM
I really love the fine form you chose for this one, it makes the poem more interesting to see it in a form like this. Congrats for the win.
La France Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 3:29 AM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats, yes I am experimenting with forms and I really like this one.
Carmack Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 4:19 PM
This poem has me there. Congrats on your win in the contest.
La France Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 3:30 AM
Rob, thanks for the congrats, oh I do love my birds ~
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December 14, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Hi Constance! Just found out that we two crossed the line neck to neck:) Congratulations on this delightful winning Terzanelle which puts in the limelight these small common birds which hardly ever receive enough due praise. ~ Regards // paul
La France Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 3:32 AM
Paul, thanks for the congrats and the nice comment, those little birds survive here in Canada in the coldest temperatures, amazing to me... they are seen just hopping along the snow
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December 14, 2015 at 2:32 PM
I wish this form was used more often..I think it is delightful. Congrats. BG
La France Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 3:34 AM
Barbara, thanks for the congrats, I also like the form, it seems difficult but really once I got the flow of it, it was not too bad ~
Puddifoot Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 11:19 AM
a delightful, wintry nature poem, constance, intricately written, and i really appreciated your crafting of the terzanelle - a lovely contrast to paul's haiku, so i placed them together - congrats on your win in my contest!
La France Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 3:36 AM
Charlotte thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am honored to be placed along side Paul ~
Cheema Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:47 AM
Just mesmerised, no words Constance! A well deserved placement!
La France Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Balveen, thanks for that lovely comment, so appreciated ~
Inman Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Lovely poem BW.
La France Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 3:14 PM
James, thank you for the lovely ~
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December 2, 2015 at 9:30 AM
One of my favorite forms and you have done it so well.
La France Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Richard, thank you so much for the support, I was afraid of the form at first but now I sort of love it ~
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December 1, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Hello Broken Wings... yes, sparrows are quirky little birds that have adapted well to human company, and it does intrigue me on how they survive the bitter cold. I enjoyed your poem - thank you BW - Lindsay
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December 2, 2015 at 5:25 AM
Lindsay, thanks so much for visiting and the comment, yes, it is so amazing to me how such a tiny litter creature can exist in the freezing temperatures we get in Canada, amazing little bird that often goes unnoticed because we are so used to them...
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December 1, 2015 at 8:39 AM
A beautiful poem, Broken Wings. I love it. An easy seven for me.
La France Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 5:25 AM
and thanks for the 7 !!!!
La France Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Cona, thanks so much for visiting my poem, it was lonely ..lol
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