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Winter Sonata: Serenade of Silence and Shelter

I. In the hush of the first movement, Silent snowfall plays a soft overture. Each flake a note, descending gently, A white serenade to quiet streets. Nature's breath slows, like a pianissimo, And the world finds refuge in the stillness. II. The allegro of frostnip, A brisk dance of biting winds. Trees, skeletal and stark, bow in unison, Their frozen limbs, a winter waltz. Here, shadows wrap around the day, A protective shroud from the harsh glare. III. Andante, the pace of chilled introspection, As daylight wanes, and darkness ascends. Winter's cloak, a shield from the revealing sun, A sanctuary for those who seek solace. A silent sonata of solitudinal echoes, Footprints muffled in the snow's embrace. IV. Adagio, the languid drift of snowflakes, A delicate descent, like feathers from the sky. Time stretches, as if caught in a frozen dream, And the world slips into a quiet reverie. In winter's arms, a clandestine asylum, Hidden from the stark exposure of summer. V. Rallentando, the gradual deceleration, As winter's sonata reaches its conclusion. The landscape, a canvas of muted hues, Soft whispers of a fading symphony. Yet, in the cold, a warmth is found, A paradoxical embrace of winter's serenade.

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Date: 12/14/2023 4:04:00 PM
You hit a celestial chord with this exquisite winter sonata, Jaymee. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/26/2023 10:49:00 AM
This is epic poetry.. The use of language and how you have narrated your words is a sign of a talented poet.. I have written poems in this way also.. The musicality of your poem adds depth to it and I think this one will do well in the contest.
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 12/9/2023 9:09:00 AM
What an incredibly nice thing to say, Silent One. I am sorry it took me so long to find this comment! Thank you!!
Date: 11/26/2023 3:22:00 AM
Ahh I see what you did here. Took the brief and adhered to it 100%... Impressive :) I could learn a thing or two knocking about with you...
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 11/26/2023 3:46:00 AM
I imagine there are a million less obvious ways to fulfill the spec but I quite liked being able to hang the words so neatly across an existing structure.

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