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WINTER SONATA

Flakes, like a lady’s gloves, gently pulled off finger by finger, one by one, laid upon her lap. The lay of land, it’s lap of snowy-white glows in the velvety twilight of Winter’s hourglass. Black and white kittens, both snowballs of sorts, in puppy love, whilst the stars sparkle, like a ballroom dance floor, shine like waxy-ice. The flurries, like downy feathers, float, so slowly. Elegance of lovers with lady-locks and manly beards. Kids blink as they bow and curtsy - they always miss the snowman show. Blows the cold cream and powder puff. Glistening of cracking ice. The tracks of high heels from endless waltz of Winter night, and the snowlady is warmed by her fox trot. Chattering of children’s teeth, like applause - they’ve stayed up way too late. It’s nearly eight.

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Date: 11/29/2023 6:46:00 AM
- What a wonderful poem ...a pleasure to read, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 11/29/2023 1:10:00 AM
You wrote this poem with great Elegance mixing imagery so perfectly. Hugs,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 3:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 11/28/2023 3:42:00 PM
I found your poem delight, enchanting, and a tad melancholic...perhaps because the poem is about winter. Your poem is truly a beautiful sonata delicately written with beautiful imagery. Well done, Kim. I liked it...have a splendid evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 3:34:00 AM
You are always so encouraging, dear Sara! Thank you xx
Date: 11/28/2023 2:52:00 PM
Some really exquisite lines in your free verse. That form is right up your alley.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 3:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea! :)
Date: 11/28/2023 2:35:00 PM
Gorgeous poetry! You enchanted me with it- I honestly tend to see it more on the melancholic side, but you showed me something new. Always enjoy!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 3:33:00 AM
I do enjoy Winter though hate when I can’t get warmed up. Thank you, Paige!
Date: 11/28/2023 11:15:00 AM
This is lovely Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 3:33:00 AM
Thank you, Silent! xx
Date: 11/28/2023 8:19:00 AM
Your Winter poem is truly enchanting. Love it! A fave for me :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 3:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne! :)
Date: 11/28/2023 8:12:00 AM
You rose well to the challenge Kim, an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 3:32:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 11/28/2023 7:39:00 AM
This is as breathless as the fresh fallen snow, details to enchant and inspire. Love it so. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 3:32:00 AM
So happy you like this one, Gina! xx
Date: 11/28/2023 7:22:00 AM
Your "WINTER SONATA" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 3:31:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!

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