Winter Snow

glazed by winter snow

colored plumes of birds takes flight...

diving on iced twigs



Traditional Haiku Contest/ Catie Lindsey
9th September 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 30, 2016 at 10:16 PM
The only spring snow I remembers was at my granny's burial...not a deep snow but plenty of flakes. But I remember a fall snow too, having to come home early from a Thanksgiving dinner because the roads were getting slick. Interesting description of the birds contrasting color with the whiteness of the snow. Congratulations on your win.
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September 27, 2016 at 2:45 PM
A creative and beautiful image, Gabby! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Roberts Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 12:53 PM
loved it congrats....Seren
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September 26, 2016 at 11:31 AM
ohh, this is really splendid, gabby, a winner indeed!... sweet congrats and thanks for your comments.. huggs
Scars Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 10:35 AM
beautiful Gabby! congrats on your win :)-luloo
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September 26, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Beautiful write Gabby - well done on your win Regards, Mark
Lawless Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Excellent Gabby, congrats.
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September 26, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations, Gabby! ...Fran
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September 26, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Beautiful Winter image! Congratulations, Gabby!
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