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Winter Skin - Summer Skin

Winter Skin/ Summer Skin Winter Skin cap on head Rudolph-nosed; my cheeks rosy red Summer Skin my suntan lotion like rivulets of warm butter drips from me Oct. 21, 2021 For William Kekaula's Lune (Mixed Pair) Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/28/2021 2:42:00 PM
Sound delightful for both seasons. Enjoyed reading your mix for the contest. Sara
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Date: 10/22/2021 11:59:00 PM
Both are very seasonal a good mixed pair...Delice
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Date: 10/22/2021 2:54:00 AM
Wow the winter part is exotic fantastic for me and summer part is beach relatable. Kudos for two bunches of super stanzas. >>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~`¶§ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
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Date: 10/22/2021 12:33:00 AM
What a lovely mixed pair! Beautiful.
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Date: 10/21/2021 3:37:00 PM
Nice entry Andrea...
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Date: 10/21/2021 1:45:00 PM
Ah yes. Winter skin itches and is chapped and red. Summer skin is warm and brown and feels good because of all the suntan lotion. Of course sometimes we do burn and then it's no paradise either. Good stuff here Andrea. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/21/2021 11:47:00 AM
Hello Andrea, yes different seasons , different skin care. Hugs.
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Date: 10/21/2021 11:28:00 AM
Oooh you have to do another, Spring and Autumn skin!
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Date: 10/21/2021 10:07:00 AM
Wonderful write. Love it. God bless you with a win. Love ya, Gina
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Date: 10/21/2021 7:21:00 AM
That's quite a mix. I have stopped swimming because I can never put lotion on my back.
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Date: 10/21/2021 7:20:00 AM
Love the way you've drawn this contrast Andrea. Very clever. Lovely imagery too... Rudolph nosed.. brilliant.
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