Winter Season Musings Haiku Chain

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rush hour five o'clock hands clinging to a milestone bus smash up victim Observe the iced twigs. trembling in cold winter wind as they didn't have mitts winter's crowning gloat Chandeliers of ice crystals Melt away slowly the fireplace burns wood There are seeds beneath the snow tonight, dream of spring Written; November 13, 2021

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/15/2021 8:21:00 PM

Your haiku is engaging and lovely, Lasaad. Your imagery is always so pleasing. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2021 1:54:00 PM

The seeds dreaming of spring and most every person and animal are dreaming as well. I enjoyed reading these Haiku today. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/14/2021 3:30:00 AM

Lasaad, I enjoyed your thoughts of winter...Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 11/14/2021 5:57:00 AM

Thanks for your kindness, Delice. Have a safe weekend

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/14/2021 2:00:00 AM

Great imagery Lasaad, I'm already looking forward to spring and winter is far from over. Tom

Sotto Poet
Date: 11/14/2021 5:55:00 AM

Thanks, dear friend Tom; indeed, we didn't make it through the winter with his frigid shivers and ice rain; I'm hoping for a quick transition to spring.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/13/2021 9:42:00 PM

I am swept away again by your profound imagery, my favorite here is 'Chandeliers of ice crystals' - wintertime can be dangerous but also beautiful -

Sotto Poet
Date: 11/14/2021 5:56:00 AM

Thanks for your kindness, Michelle. Have a safe weekend