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The snowflakes are falling like the words from my heart, on the scenery they soon become part; and I breathe snowflakes_ my world changes to a beautiful work of fine art, and my rosy cheeks are snow kissed ~ I walk the forest paths meandering in thought, part of a painting that cannot be bought; and I breathe snowflakes_ winter fills me with joy and a knot, and my rosy cheeks are snow kissed ~ I was born in a winter blizzard storm weeping, into my life snow is always seeping; and I breathe snowflakes_ cold winter into my poems is always creeping, and my rosy cheeks are snow kissed ~ I am filled with great joy when the first snowflakes fall, when winter says I am here to enthral; and I breathe snowflakes_ in the snow my name I like to scrawl, and my rosy cheeks are snow kissed ~ ________________________ December 11, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Winter Rhapsody Copyright Protected, ID 12-1311-198-11 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Winter sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 01/03/21 Second Place

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Date: 1/9/2021 10:37:00 PM
How your words make me long to be amidst the snowflakes Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful second placement in Emile’s contest. Beautifully created! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/10/2021 4:45:00 AM
Connie, thank you for the lovely comment and the congratulations and the beautiful _Constance
Date: 1/3/2021 5:57:00 PM
so beautiful, Dear Heart. Congrats on a very well deserved placement!
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Date: 1/3/2021 10:10:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the congrats and the beautiful _Constance
Date: 1/3/2021 9:33:00 AM
Congrats on this win with this charming and inspiring write. It's a beauty for sure. I love it. God bless you sweet friend
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:37:00 PM
Gina, thank you for the the compliment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 1/3/2021 9:07:00 AM
Terrific imagery and repetition of fabulous lines! Congratulations on the win Constance! Linda
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:38:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 1/3/2021 8:36:00 AM
Wow! I love the thought of "breathing" snowflakes, Constance. Awesome poem. Congratulations on your podium finish in Emile's contest! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:38:00 PM
Carolyn, thanks for the compliments and for the congratulations, appreciate _Constance
Date: 1/3/2021 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your amazing poem has placed "Second" in my contest. You should take pride, for it was a difficult contest to judge, I was very strict, but your poem was special and caught my eye. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:40:00 PM
Emile, thank you for another amazing contest, you always bring out the best in me, and thank you so much for my great placement, yes, I can imagine how hard it is to judge so many entries _Constance
Date: 1/3/2021 7:55:00 AM
Beautiful Poem of Winter, dear Constance Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:40:00 PM
Elaine, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats _Constance
Date: 12/11/2020 11:49:00 AM
wow Constance what an unusual for i love the impact of the repeated lines in your lovely winter poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/11/2020 3:54:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting, you know me, I like create new layouts and forms, thanks so much for the compliment and the hugs _Constance

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