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Winter Queen With cat like silence a winter queen dresses the still woods in ice cream dream. Trees bow to her majesty from up high, as she summons gray clouds to fill the sky. Her chilly lips kiss in crystal wet drops, divinely fashioned, until it stops. In screaming winds, the winter queen, loses fury from her northern scene. Icy fingers touch tender ribs in cold shock. through layers of clothes that bar them not. All hail, the winter queen, her lactescent highness, most serene. Busying herself throughout the night, she dresses the land in virgin white. She waves her wand and all transforms, from snowy nights to crisp clear morns. 1/1/17 Form C - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 3/13/2018 11:20:00 AM
I agree w/Reason ... lactescent, really. Your poem is so cool feline linguistic divine. Cool mint poetry for real. Giving us warm winter chills. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:25:00 PM
neat piece on the ice queen. One of my favorite forms likewise. Lactescent - quite a mouthful, yet fitting indeed. Congrats.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/9/2017 11:16:00 PM
Thanks so much for stopping by. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 1/9/2017 2:55:00 PM
Beautiful personification - congrats on you win, Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/9/2017 11:17:00 PM
Thanks Agnes.
Date: 1/9/2017 8:57:00 AM
Congrats, Janis!
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Date: 1/9/2017 11:17:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 1/9/2017 6:40:00 AM
Beautifully described. Congratulations, Janis. A 7 & a fav.
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Date: 1/9/2017 11:18:00 PM
Afzal, I appreciate the rating and especially the fav. Blessings to you, Janis.
Date: 1/2/2017 8:24:00 PM
Her personality seems a bit cold. Great personification, Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/3/2017 1:42:00 PM
Yes, as we all know she can get very cold. Thanks.

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