Winter P's and Q's

Winter P’s and Q’s 

Poised in the alluring perfume
Of dawn’s first light,
Robed in views of new unbroken snows,
Like winter’s penance of poise,
Palms of Spanish Dagger with steel blue spikes 
Send up quick questions in quaint quandary
To threatening platinum skies
Of their intentions to quiver in a repeat rondeau
With the poise of a midwinter minuet
By sending snowflakes to cover the harbor quay,
The gaudy gallery of empty tree limbs
And haunting gnomes of frozen fences posts
To fill the space around their round hearts
Then leave their empty arms entreating the cold sky
Now wearing new identities as porcupine snowballs! 

Based on seeing spikey plants in a snowstorm.
Eight words used:
platinum, penance, poise, perfume
quay, quiver, quandary, quaint

3-1-21
Contest: Mind Your P’s and Q’s
Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/8/2021 6:22:00 AM
You have amazing imagery in this one Sam. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/8/2021 9:22:00 AM
:) - Thank you so much Linda! We were in the northwest when a three day snowstorm hit. The world was literally transformed before our eyes! Michelle's words just seemed a perfect fit to describe this wonderland of beauty with the porcupine snowballs being the cherry on the sundae! Hope you are well. Blessings!
Date: 3/6/2021 4:32:00 PM
what superb imagery Sam i especially love the final two lines:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/7/2021 9:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan. While on a walk in the snow I discovered these plants that looked just snowballs turned into porcupines! Just made me smile. So glad you could enjoy this sight with me through Micelle's very creative contest. Blessings and hugs to you!
Date: 3/6/2021 9:49:00 AM
Sam, this is so imaginative, especially love 'winter’s penance of poise' and 'quick questions in quaint quandary' - and I love the image of porcupine snowballs! Thanks for entering, and congratulations~
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/7/2021 9:10:00 AM
This was such a fun contest, Michelle. Thank you for your message of encouragement, sponsorship and your placement! Had a ball crafting the words into this snowbound adventure during the last snowstorm in the northwest! Still laugh when I think about the "porcupine snowballs." All the best my friend!
Date: 3/2/2021 5:40:00 AM
Love this. Best wishes for a win. God bless you my friend. Happy writing. Love, Gina
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/7/2021 9:06:00 AM
This was such a funny sight in a snowstorm. Had to put it into words. So glad you enjoyed my porcupine snowball adventure, my friend. Sending love and blessings for you and that creative pen of yours!
Date: 3/1/2021 2:40:00 PM
Love the way you've used the words of the contest, so much better then mine. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your visit and compliment on my Harbinger Birds of Spring poem. Hugs Eve
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/7/2021 9:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve! The plants with their spikey leaves sticking out of the snow was such a fun sight. Still makes me smile. Blessings to you!
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