Winter Proposal

With my soul at peace and my thoughts at rest,
standing in this winter wilderness,
I whisper words of heartfelt bliss.

Come with me and walk this path.
Together we tread against the freeze,
and find the warmth of tender grasp.

My devoted being shall forever be,
a place of strength against chilled winds,
a brilliant light only you have seen.

Our lives have met in this quiet space.
Let sky meet land and rivers merge.
Forever, harmony I long to taste.

We have summoned light from darkest days.
Heat returns to melt still ice.
Each day length now brings stronger rays.

The deepest snows cannot hide the facts.
Beneath these layers life holds fast.
Newfound joys spring from bleakest past.

Let's rebuild life from broken dreams,
Where life restarts with each new spring,
the snows will melt to feed fresh streams.

Like this land, my passion runs free.
Walls have come down with earnest words.
My unblinded eyes now see.

I ask for your hand without ounce of gold,
or shiny stones dug from filthy earth.
My eternal love cannot be bought or sold.

Under peaks reborn of volcanic scars,
In night's serene and  starkest silence,
I pledge love to outlast the multitude of stars.

Solitude I turn from on this ride.
Today and tomorrow let's walk in stride.
Promise to be my utopian bride.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 3:43 PM
This was good. Well written romantic words. Liked the poem and the sentiment.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 4:22 PM
This one goes to my favorites, an oustanding romantic piece.
Gregory Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Very, very nice!
Bantawa Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 4:29 PM
putting you on my fav list.
Deal Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 10:19 PM
A stunning and very romantic poem. The imagery you've expressed in your words is amazing. I loved this poem very, very much. And welcome to poetrysoup. Karla~
Ink-U-Script Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 8:38 AM
Oh wow...incredible words expressed here. I love how you were trying to reassure her security in love. Starting new isn't always easy...this is a beauty!!
Carrillo Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 9:53 PM
Wayne; This is very beautiful and romantic. It will go to my favs. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will be reading some more of your poems.... Lucilla
Secrest Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 1:24 PM
Great poem, a beautiful and heartfelt expression of love! Welcome to p-soup, hope you love it here! -Heather
Devnath  Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 11:01 AM
Oh! nice line is penned here "eternal love cannot be bought or sold". It's a metaphysical poem, I feel. Beautifully worded and depicted your beautiful heart feeling. Loved always, bl
Jordan Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 2:22 PM
Wow, This is positively beautiful! I love this! I love how you have such passion put into this as a proposal to your 'Utopian bride'. Absolutely favoring this, Wayne! would rate it higher if it was possible:)
Eastman Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 10:40 AM
Very romantic... Love the images and wording.
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Passionate and romantic work..I hope that she said yes...Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
Hill Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 7:39 PM
she did say yes indeed...almost brought her to tears.
Fiery Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 9:03 AM
Let's rebuild life from broken dreams, Where life restarts with each new spring,...very inspiring write Wayne...I have always admired your work...cheers !
Lu Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 6:48 PM
For such a long form it is flowing, profound with good, vivid imagery. I can tell you've have been writing for a long time. You are a real talent. Keep amazing me... I like it! :) Cindy
Lu Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 6:44 PM
wow... You are one intense writer Wayne. And to answer a bit of a puzzling fact that some of my poems go unrecognized somewhat.. It's OK I work at a small local magazine put out by a newspaper in Ohio and I have a few thousand readers there.. nothing major but it keeps me from giving up my writing. I've been here 6 years and was the black balled writer for a very long time. Jeleousies at one time and a gentleman writer here.. enough said?? smile, its all good .. Have a good night Wayne. Cindy
Hill Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Don't give up writing.....I am going to put you down as one of my favorites! I can't imagine what it was like to be black balled.......interesting.
A  Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 8:44 AM
Wayne, absolute- one of the best poems I've read all week. , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Hill Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 9:39 AM
thank you for the encouragement!
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 1:30 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Wayne ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 8:11 PM
soup mail...........:-)
A   Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 6:58 PM
hello, Wayne,, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
Perry Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 6:50 PM
I enjoyed this poem...very heartfelt. Welcome to the Soup!
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