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Winter Peace

Winter Peace An old branch brushing against the eve Rhythm of rain on the window Wood burning low in the fire Chopin soothing the soul Memories awake Soup simmering Love’s own hand Safe now Home

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Skat A

Date: 6/12/2015 1:24:00 AM

Barbara, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Diane Christian

Date: 6/9/2015 7:38:00 AM

congratulations on your lovely write I love real log fire and especially soup. bliss

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/8/2015 6:37:00 PM

Beautifully done, Barbara.

Daver Austin

Date: 6/8/2015 3:10:00 PM

This sounds like perfection to me. Perhaps a glass of wine, and not noisy Chopin, not the famous Polonaise. I love your good taste. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/8/2015 7:03:00 AM

On your winter peace is so peaceful, I'd like to say in your write awhile! Nicely done :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/10/2008 6:57:00 PM

Dear Barbara, all the comforts of a happy Home "Love's own hand" Sounds like some one LOVES you as I LOVE LENORE YOUR Friend in POETRY...HG P.S. I'm working on YOUR Nonet I have to go to a culinary convention this week-end talk to YOU next Monday No YOU did not offend me with YOUR question will answer that next week also YOU should read Aqua-Rose for a start to the answer I wrote that less than a week after LENORE DIED LOVE ALWAYS...HG

John Heck

Date: 11/28/2008 3:01:00 PM

A lovely Nonet. Inviting, cozy and filled with wondrous visuals, scents and genuine feeling. A very comforting poem to read and enjoy! Wishing you and your loved ones Happy Holidays. Peace always, John

Fritz Purdum

Date: 11/26/2008 8:45:00 AM

What I love about winter-cold outside, warm inside, great poem, Thank you for your very encouraging comments on my poems. Fritz

Date: 11/26/2008 8:11:00 AM

What a wonderful thought! Such a peaceful scene. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words regarding my poem. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 11/26/2008 6:15:00 AM

Barbara, theimagery here is terrific and the flow is smooth while the tone perfect. If I may suggest adding one word to the 1st line "An old branch" otherwise a lovely write and read. Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/25/2008 7:16:00 PM

A dreamy, homey poem. What could be nicer than Chopin playing, the smell of comfort in the house, and love and warmth! You set the perfect mood. Nicely done~ Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/25/2008 6:33:00 PM

Another beautiful write from you my friend. I am there enjoying this moment in this well written write of yours. Much love, Chris.

Juliane Thomas

Date: 11/25/2008 3:24:00 PM

A woodfire, rain on the windowpain, classical music, hot soup, and the one you love...what more could a person ask for? A bit of heaven on earth! Beautiful poem in a form I haven't tried yet, but will be sure to now! ***edit: I tried one, and I like it! What a nice form of poetry! :)

Michael Torres

Date: 11/25/2008 2:41:00 PM

Barbara this is so peaceful and tranquile excellent write. Have a peaceful and love filled thanksgiving.GBU Michael

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/25/2008 2:34:00 PM

I love this Nonet. It flows so well and has such a wonderful homely atmosphere. Nocturnes? Ahhh, that soup smells good! Awesome write! Love, Nigel