Winter on the Old Homestead


Three kids to a bed, two beds to a room, three 
rooms crowded with flannel long johns and wool 
socks. If I was lucky enough maybe they had only 
been worn by two or three brothers before me. 
No holes was never a guarantee.

Mama had us tucked in tight under hand stitched 
quilts made from squares of worn-out clothes that 
was deemed no good for anything else. So heavy 
that it was impossible to sleep on my back. 
Or it would make my toes hurt all night.

Morning would come whenever nature demanded. As
soon as it was light enough to see the bowl of ice 
capped water, I could splash a few drops on my face.
On some of those more courageous mornings, 
a few of the more important parts.

The sides of the pot-bellied stove could turn as 
red as the devil’s hood if the stoker was too generous
with the logs, or go out altogether if it was neglected
for too long. Deep scratches gouged into the floor from 
constantly shifting chairs. 

A good autumn from the garden, creek banks, and the 
woods beyond provided enough to ease the
grumbling of winter stomachs. The occupants of 
the chicken coop did their job diligently. As did
the former occupants of the pig pen and the pasture.

By January deep paths cut through waist high snow
to the outhouse, smokehouse, chicken coop
and wood pile. Only three more months until the 
grass can be seen again. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 4/6/2024 9:07:00 AM
Hey Jerry, this is a testament to the strength and resilience of ordinary people facing extraordinary circumstances. Through its evocative imagery and honest portrayal of life's struggles and triumphs, the poem invites readers to reflect on the enduring power of family, community, and the human spirit
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Date: 4/6/2024 4:12:00 AM
Jerry, a wonderful poem, nostalgia at it's best, those were simpler times with more struggles and also deeper family bonds.
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Date: 4/5/2024 6:09:00 PM
Dear Jerry, your recollection of winter is a journey back to simpler times, filled with the warmth of family and the resilience of survival. The imagery of crowded rooms, hand-stitched quilts, and ice-capped water bowls creates a picture of life's hardships and simple pleasures. I loved how your narrative captures the essence of resourcefulness and hard work, as families relied on the bounty of the land to sustain them through harsh winters. Your reminiscence is a testament to the enduring spirit of those who braved the elements and found solace in the bonds of family and the rhythms of nature. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/5/2024 12:26:00 PM
I remember some people lived like this in the 50's. There was a lot of hardship, but no digital frustration. This is a keen, nostalgic poem.
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