Valsa George Poet Sedoka

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Winter Night Ws

stars shimmer in sky
moon on routine sentry watch
crispy spell of snow below

embers from fireplace
peek out through the windowsill
night sleeps blanketed in snow


Jan.11.2023


Winter Sedoka Poetry Contest
Syllabe Count- 5,7,7   5,7, 7 HMS
Sponsor- Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick January 26, 2023 at 6:23 AM I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2023 at 1:21 PM Back with my congrats for you, Valsa.

Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 8:52 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write/picture. I wish I was there by your fireside. Have a wonderful day..............

Charles Messina January 25, 2023 at 5:24 AM Beautiful imagery, Valsa. Lovely! Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Charlie Valsa George January 27, 2023 at 2:33 AM Thanks a lot Charles for having organized this contest and choosing me a winner. As I was away from home traveling, couldn't respond earlier ! Blessings !

Sara Kendrick January 16, 2023 at 4:46 AM That was a really cold night. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Michelle Faulkner January 13, 2023 at 8:07 PM Feels like a romantic night in a cozy cabin, so evocative, best wishes for the contest~

Andrea Dietrich January 11, 2023 at 7:52 PM Gorgeous writing, Valsa.

Gershon Wolf January 11, 2023 at 7:02 PM The fireplace is such a nice background for snow. Pretty as a picture.

Sotto Poet January 11, 2023 at 6:25 AM Valsa, you have done a wonderful job writing this. The beauty of the night sky outside, combined with the warm glow of the fireplace within is just breathtaking.

Vijay Pandit January 11, 2023 at 5:49 AM Beauty of stars in the sky--warmth of fireplace indoors. Splendid write, Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar January 11, 2023 at 2:03 AM You should have put a WS at the end of your title. Otherwise, I appreciate the beautiful imagery of your Sedoka.