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Winter Night Ws

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stars shimmer in sky moon on routine sentry watch crispy spell of snow below embers from fireplace peek out through the windowsill night sleeps blanketed in snow Jan.11.2023 Winter Sedoka Poetry Contest Syllabe Count- 5,7,7 5,7, 7 HMS Sponsor- Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:23:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2023 1:21:00 PM

Back with my congrats for you, Valsa.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/25/2023 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write/picture. I wish I was there by your fireside. Have a wonderful day..............

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 5:24:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Valsa. Lovely! Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Charlie

Valsa George
Date: 1/27/2023 2:33:00 AM

Thanks a lot Charles for having organized this contest and choosing me a winner. As I was away from home traveling, couldn't respond earlier ! Blessings !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2023 4:46:00 AM

That was a really cold night. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/13/2023 8:07:00 PM

Feels like a romantic night in a cozy cabin, so evocative, best wishes for the contest~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2023 7:52:00 PM

Gorgeous writing, Valsa.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/11/2023 7:02:00 PM

The fireplace is such a nice background for snow. Pretty as a picture.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/11/2023 6:25:00 AM

Valsa, you have done a wonderful job writing this. The beauty of the night sky outside, combined with the warm glow of the fireplace within is just breathtaking.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/11/2023 5:49:00 AM

Beauty of stars in the sky--warmth of fireplace indoors. Splendid write, Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2023 2:03:00 AM

You should have put a WS at the end of your title. Otherwise, I appreciate the beautiful imagery of your Sedoka.