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Winter Magic

First frost Writes fine lines In the filigree of spider webs. The air is like chalk. Grass blades sparkle For a fleeting hour Until the sun Leaps over the trees, Laps up the fog and Licks the lawn green. 12/29/2016

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Date: 7/20/2018 9:14:00 AM
Sweet imagery, Agnes.
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Date: 12/31/2016 10:29:00 AM
WOW....WHAT A VISUAL EXPRESSION...love it Agnes. Could picture the sun leaping, lapping and licking
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/31/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, John :)
Date: 12/30/2016 8:30:00 PM
Wonderful verse, Agnes :-)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/30/2016 9:21:00 PM
thank you, Eve.
Date: 12/30/2016 7:09:00 PM
Talk about "writing fine lines..." : ) Well done, Agnes.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/30/2016 7:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Doug.
Date: 12/30/2016 2:58:00 PM
wow, agnes... brief but so robust with imagery... happy new year and huggs
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/30/2016 7:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, nette - happy new year to you, too.
Date: 12/30/2016 12:40:00 PM
Very nice, Mrs Agnes. A fun poem:)
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Date: 12/30/2016 7:34:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel.
Date: 12/30/2016 10:03:00 AM
Beautifully penned Agnes...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/30/2016 7:33:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 12/29/2016 5:51:00 PM
This is very beautiful Agnes, it feels so light and free. Nicely done.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/30/2016 7:33:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and your kind comment, Chris.

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