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Winter Magic

WINTER MAGIC Winter bites at the heels of November, A stronger lead up I can’t remember. Snow is piling up in centimeters, Wind speaks in iambic pentameter. A tiara trees triumphantly wear, Starlings by the flock do come here to stare. The North is full of impractical weather, With the Solstice comes new snowy feathers. Darkness brings a calm and being alone I slip on December, chilled to the bone, Embrace the magic in curtains of light. In that quiet moment of second sight, ‘Neath Aldebaran and the silver Moon I bow to the spirits, feel my heart swoon. Dec 28/2016

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Date: 10/2/2019 9:01:00 PM
Hey Phil Winter Magic is magically fantastic. So will soon pile up in centimeters.
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Date: 1/3/2017 6:52:00 PM
Phil, congratulations on your top win! I love the first line Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/3/2017 4:45:00 AM
Phil, congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/3/2017 2:39:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful write and win, Phil:)
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Date: 1/2/2017 6:18:00 PM
Well done Phil!! Big Congrats on your win!! Hugggs. Deb :)
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Date: 1/2/2017 4:35:00 PM
Phil, congratulations on your fine win! Well done. Happy New Year to you! Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2017 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations Phil, a well written poem a joy to read.
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Date: 1/2/2017 3:31:00 PM
Congrats well done x
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Date: 1/2/2017 2:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Phil.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 1/2/2017 2:47:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Agnes. Namaste.
Date: 12/30/2016 10:31:00 AM
"I slip on December"...that is an exceptional word image. I enjoyed this piece quite a bit.
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Date: 12/28/2016 9:59:00 AM
This was beautiful, it nicely captures the winter season and the magic that comes with it. Good luck Phil.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 12/28/2016 1:47:00 PM
TY :) fingers crossed lol
Date: 12/28/2016 9:19:00 AM
This is wonderful, a joy to read Phil, good luck in the contest.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 12/28/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thank you for your support.

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