Winter Magic

WINTER MAGIC

Winter bites at the heels of November,
A stronger lead up I can’t remember.
Snow is piling up in centimeters,
Wind speaks in iambic pentameter.

A tiara trees triumphantly wear,
Starlings by the flock do come here to stare.
The North is full of impractical weather,
With the Solstice comes new snowy feathers.

Darkness brings a calm and being alone
I slip on December, chilled to the bone,
Embrace the magic in curtains of light.
In that quiet moment of second sight,

‘Neath Aldebaran and the silver Moon
I bow to the spirits, feel my heart swoon.

Dec 28/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Hey Phil Winter Magic is magically fantastic. So will soon pile up in centimeters.
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Phil, congratulations on your top win! I love the first line Hugs Eve
White Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Phil, congratulations on your win :)
Daniel Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 2:39 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful write and win, Phil:)
Burch Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Well done Phil!! Big Congrats on your win!! Hugggs. Deb :)
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 4:35 PM
Phil, congratulations on your fine win! Well done. Happy New Year to you! Sandra
Pett Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations Phil, a well written poem a joy to read.
Rycroft Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 3:31 PM
Congrats well done x
Krampe Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Congrats on your win, Phil.
Capitano Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Thanks for stopping by Agnes. Namaste.
Pasky Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 10:31 AM
"I slip on December"...that is an exceptional word image. I enjoyed this piece quite a bit.
Green Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 9:59 AM
This was beautiful, it nicely captures the winter season and the magic that comes with it. Good luck Phil.
Capitano Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 1:47 PM
TY :) fingers crossed lol
Pett Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 9:19 AM
This is wonderful, a joy to read Phil, good luck in the contest.
Capitano Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Thank you for your support.
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