Winter Love

when light faded out 
and darkness descended
when all over me 
the icy chill began to creep  	
I slammed the windows and doors
tightly shut
and like a child crawled
into my padded bed,

while the winter gale
was still raging outside 
you broke upon my thought
as a euphonious melody.
when I longed for your warmth, 
you knocked upon my feeble heart

as your voice trailed across to me 
louder and louder,
I woke up from my languorous sleep
felt snug, the chillness around me, swept away
and a strange desire, 
coursed through my nerves 

I could feel the heat 
of your tumultuous passion
the soft touch 
of your caressing hands
the musky odor 
of your fragrant breath
the warmth in your almond eyes 

you stood before me 
as an embodiment of grace
  
you opened the windows to let in the light
not leaving me grope in blinding darkness

you took me to the seas 
of shore less delight
you enlivened every atom of my being
kindled in me the fire 
of amorous desire
swept me off my feet 
by the inundating tide of love

I felt my sleeping passions 
suddenly set ablaze

Alas, with my senses lulled to sleep
leading me into a state of serene calm
through the door ajar, 
you faded out like an evanescent dream
leaving me so stupefied....!


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Feb.20. 2022
Winter Love Poetry Contest
Sponsor- JCB Brul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 2/25/2022 9:07:00 PM
This reminds me of perhaps a past life love because of the intensity. I could relate so well to your words Valsa. After my husband passed away he came to me in a dream that was as passionate as you have expressed and I will never forget it. I have faved this gorgeous poem to read again. I loved every word! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win. Blessings xxoo
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Valsa George
Date: 2/26/2022 12:44:00 AM
It is natural to have such a dream especially after losing the one you loved so passionately! No wonder you loved my poem . I wrote this for the contest while you lived through it ! Thanks a lot Connie for making this your Fav. Feel honored,
Date: 2/20/2022 2:48:00 PM
Valsa, The romantic poem was enjoyable to read You poured out your heart and soul. Best of luck in the competition. Blessing ~ Debra
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Valsa George
Date: 2/26/2022 12:40:00 AM
Thanks a lot Debra ! This is in a way a dream within a dream
Date: 2/20/2022 7:19:00 AM
Valsa's portrayal is very voluptuous and elegant. I could tell you were passionate about what you were writing. Feelings and emotions are painted with fiery feelings. A fantasy that will put an end to all illusions. Such is the delight of imaginative play! a skillfully written poem
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Valsa George
Date: 2/26/2022 12:39:00 AM
Painted with fiery feelings..... love your great usage. Thanks a lot dear friend !
Date: 2/20/2022 5:53:00 AM
I felt the intensity of your write. Blazing emotions paint passions. A dream of dreams. Such is joy of imagination! Expertly executed poem, Valsa.
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Valsa George
Date: 2/26/2022 12:37:00 AM
Thank you for your uplifting comment dear Vijay
Date: 2/20/2022 1:27:00 AM
Very sensual and romantic Valsa, hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
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Valsa George
Date: 2/26/2022 12:36:00 AM
Thanks a lot Tom ! Have a great weekend !
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