Winter Leaves With No Smiles

" The change of seasons lessens the pain of a loss, but like stars it touches those we love leaving memories no one can steal."Quote by Poet October Fall submits to December Winter With its grounds elegant powdery dazzling snow. Kissing out tears of November rain to enter Its final arctic breath and pinch of mystic glow. No two snowflakes are alike upon window sill, Or wind rhymes that tumbles love unforgotten times. I search past recollections on curtains lace frill Bring back bright times as grandfather clock silent chimes. Memories of things like falling leaves or snowflakes Evoke a pleasing loving embrace then crumbles On the anniversary of a loss, does wakes Utter helplessness as the numb heart beat stumbles. Winter leaves with no smiles as it makes it its own Taking the world in its embrace leaving its mark. Please to see Spring beauty and birds melodic tone And watch the clouds unfurl across the pressing dark. October Fall submits to December Winter. No two snowflakes are alike upon window sill, Memories of things like falling leaves or snowflakes Winter leaves with no smiles as it makes it its own. 12/11/2020 Rhyme Pattern - 4 stanzas, 4 lines of abab cdcd efef ghgh, last verse repeat a, c, e, g lines, 12 syllables per line

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Date: 12/15/2020 3:57:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this excellent poem, I like your quote too _Constance
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Date: 12/15/2020 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "Memories of things like falling leaves or snowflakes." They are. Enjoy your win with blessings and a hug................
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Date: 12/15/2020 3:42:00 AM
" The change of seasons lessens the pain of a loss, but like stars it touches those we love leaving memories no one can steal." Quote _by Poet Eve, would you mind if I use this quote , to build a poem of my own on, I love it Did you write it ?
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/15/2020 3:51:00 AM
Yes I did write it . It was one of the requirements of the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/15/2020 3:50:00 AM
Thank you,and Yes you may use it
Date: 12/15/2020 3:41:00 AM
This is one of your very best Eve, you have untied the knots of simplicity loosened every talented vibe in your body, I will fav this , and send you a hug to warm your day, Thinking and praying for you, always xo
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Date: 12/14/2020 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in the contest, Dear friend :) This is a incredibly B E A U T I F U L piece of writing. I enjoyed it so much and am thankful to have read it. God bless you always
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Date: 12/14/2020 8:49:00 PM
Thank you, Regina, for the encouragement and your blessings they mean a lot. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/14/2020 4:20:00 PM
so beautifully penned Eve many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2020 8:49:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/14/2020 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.... wonderful nature poem.
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Date: 12/14/2020 2:10:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs
Date: 12/14/2020 5:04:00 AM
Beautiful poem on the seasons Eve..best wishes
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Date: 12/14/2020 2:26:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2020 2:13:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Date: 12/13/2020 6:25:00 PM
Beautiful words “ No two snowflakes are alike upon window sill” congrats on your win!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Date: 12/13/2020 5:03:00 PM
Your imagery is gorgeous; congratulations on your number 1 win, Eve. You deserved it.
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Date: 12/14/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you dear friend in spirit. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/13/2020 2:43:00 PM
WoW! Even, This is just lovely! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/14/2020 2:15:00 PM
Thank you for the wow! Hugs
Date: 12/13/2020 2:29:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Eve. I enjoyed this very much :) Congratulations!
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Date: 12/14/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank you so much. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/13/2020 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve, on you number 1 placement in the contest for this lovely poem on nature's beauty while Winter slowly approaches!!
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Date: 12/14/2020 2:27:00 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs Eve
Date: 12/12/2020 6:40:00 AM
I can picture you gazing out of the window, Eve, as memories tiptoe in quietly. A beautiful poem, and the rhyme pattern was not as easy as one might think. Hugs // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2020 2:27:00 PM
You made my day. Hugs
Date: 12/11/2020 9:05:00 AM
Beautiful poem. One can feel the cold but feels the poem singing like a tune. ~~
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Date: 12/14/2020 2:28:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/11/2020 12:12:00 AM
That’s beautiful Eve, brings back memories of winters long ago, “With its grounds elegant powdery dazzling snow.” One of your lovely lines in a lovely poem... Belle :-)
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/14/2020 2:28:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve
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