Winter Journey End

WINTER JOURNEY’S END

Their calculations must have been at fault
Their instruments in need to calibrate
That wandering star’s location in the vault
Had seemed a compass true, inviolate

The auguries had all concurred to say
Event of moment in the cosmic scheme
To change the world forever come what may
Would come to pass; they’d seen it all in dream

Yet here they found themselves upon that night 
Within a byre with beasts and men unblest
To witness scene both rude and recondite
The focus and the end point of their quest:

Young mother - fate to suffer, heart to bleed
Child God incarnate, laid in cattle feed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/6/2021 7:11:00 PM
So glad to find this beautiful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 12/31/2019 7:01:00 PM
Very descriptive and compelling Geoff--congrats!
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Date: 12/31/2019 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win!;)
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Date: 6/27/2019 7:59:00 AM
For me this is a magnificent sonnet, superbly crafted my friend. Have a blessed day.. A fav... and another gem too...
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/27/2019 3:52:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind words, Robert.
Date: 10/27/2018 10:23:00 PM
The Christmas story from a different slant. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 10/28/2018 12:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joyce
Date: 10/27/2018 4:41:00 PM
Uniquely magnificent Geoffrey! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 10/28/2018 12:00:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind comments, Connie.
Date: 10/18/2018 5:04:00 AM
Wow! So aptly spoken. An interesting write! Well done, Geoffrey!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 10/19/2018 9:20:00 AM
Many thanks, Kim.
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