Winter Is On His Way

Now autumn is fading slowly away and nights lengthen
oh! too soon marches in winter with icy chilly fingers 
that every thing touched falls into deep slumbering sleep .
as soft pure white flakes fall thick and fast covering all/

Letting us know that it will be long till the sun breaks
winter's time to rule with Jack Frost playing his jokes.
Water slows and often freezes as it touches frozen land
hoar frost covers the trees. icicles descend from branches.

The earth becomes a wonder land that sparkles and twinkles
as we huddle in front of roaring log fire that hiss and spit
sullenly at us sending showers of red hot sparks of weird
colours that enchant and beguile us with heavenly pine scents.

The air is full of different scents and spices from all the goodies
that have been baked, tantalizing our taste buds and we think
Winter is not so bad as we sing carols and play the usual games
while we tear open all the delightful  presents under the tree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/1/2023 5:28:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2023 8:26:00 PM
Soon winter will come with her icy fingers and most of the people will stay indoors ! It has its boon and bliss alike. We don't have winter here in my place. However winter season is a beauty to behold from far. "The earth becomes a wonder land that sparkles and twinkles as we huddle in front of roaring log fire that hiss and spit" Beautiful description dear Shadow.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2023 8:45:00 PM
You sure know how to paint a wintery scene with your imagery and descriptive poetry, Shadow. Thanks for bringing back some good and fun memories of Christmas and winters past. Have a pleasant week! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/18/2023 9:44:00 PM
aw ty Bill memories are good to recall hugs Shadow
Date: 11/8/2023 11:29:00 AM
Enchanting write, Shadow: Maybe winter isn’t so bad after all. Cheers, SuZ
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/8/2023 2:25:00 PM
Hi Suz glad you enjoyed it hugs Shadow
Date: 10/27/2023 2:37:00 PM
This one is very descriptive of the times ahead except for in the south we don't have snow very often. I enjoyed reading your lines. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/8/2023 2:23:00 PM
hi Sara ty for visiting my page and leaving such nice remarks sorry for slow reply I needed time to grieve my dog hugs Shadow
Date: 10/24/2023 8:45:00 PM
Your way with conveying thoughts and feelings is so very descriptive and poetic. I absolutely love the way this flows and how you’ve woven words in such eloquence. I especially love the lines “ showers of red hot sparks of weird colours that enchant and beguile us with heavenly pine scents.” Just wow! That’s unique and very creative how you’ve phrased that! I am in awe captivated! Sending you light today and always
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/25/2023 9:58:00 AM
Ty Ink for your lovely comments hugs Shadow
Date: 10/23/2023 5:38:00 PM
Yes during holiday time. Winter is splendid. It is January I despise. Very pretty one.
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/24/2023 3:04:00 PM
Ty Andy pleased you like it hugs Shadow
Date: 10/22/2023 3:05:00 PM
This is such an enchanting seasonal poem Shadow. So very descriptive and depicted beautifully. You’ve created some lovely, vivid images,’ as soft, pure white flakes full thick and fast covering all,’ ‘ hoar frost covers the trees’ ‘ roaring log fire’. Delightful! Love the last two lines with the arrival of the most magical time of the year’. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs to you
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/22/2023 3:10:00 PM
Ty Christina for your lovely remarks hugs Shadow
Date: 10/22/2023 1:14:00 PM
Yes you are right and you describe it so well.. nice use of adjectives and vocabulary throughout your poem...
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/22/2023 2:12:00 PM
ty dear Silent enjoyed your comments Hugs Shadow
Date: 10/22/2023 1:04:00 PM
Very well written; with excellent imagery and language use. Winter will soon be here, and I really don't like the cold.
Login to Reply
Hamilton Avatar
Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/22/2023 2:10:00 PM
nor do I Hate being cold ty very much for your kind comments hugs Shadow
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter