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I am trying to learn Iambic Pentameter so any help is appreciated.

and snow is falling softly this long night . . . ___________________ January 28, 2016 lambic Pentameter

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Date: 1/31/2016 4:11:00 AM
that's a well penned line there BW, excellent for a first
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 4:48:00 AM
Sage, thank you so much for the encouragement, maybe I will be brave and do two lines next !!
Date: 1/29/2016 10:57:00 AM
Very nicely done, BW.
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:49:00 PM
James, thanks for that and for the help in the background, lol !!
Date: 1/28/2016 10:17:00 AM
Master of Iambic Pentameter, you opened the window of your soul.It snows like in a fairy tale.Congrat: And the snowflakes meet my eyes and the lakes/ While thy face in the mirrors meet the grace.
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:13:00 AM
Ovidiu, oh thank you for that lovely poetic comment, I love it ~~