Winter Is Knocking-

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I am trying to learn Iambic Pentameter so any help is appreciated.


and snow is falling softly this long night . . .

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January 28, 2016

lambic Pentameter

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White Sage

Date: 1/31/2016 4:11:00 AM

that's a well penned line there BW, excellent for a first

Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 4:48:00 AM

Sage, thank you so much for the encouragement, maybe I will be brave and do two lines next !!

James Inman

Date: 1/29/2016 10:57:00 AM

Very nicely done, BW.

Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2016 2:49:00 PM

James, thanks for that and for the help in the background, lol !!

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 1/28/2016 10:17:00 AM

Master of Iambic Pentameter, you opened the window of your soul.It snows like in a fairy tale.Congrat: And the snowflakes meet my eyes and the lakes/ While thy face in the mirrors meet the grace.

Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2016 11:13:00 AM

Ovidiu, oh thank you for that lovely poetic comment, I love it ~~