Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Winter In the South

Some years winter is very mild.
Warm afternoons to sit in the sun.
Or do something fun, maybe wild
outside, instead of coming undone.
      
Some years winter in the south vary
About every ten years or so
There'll be deep snow in our zonary
Freezing rain, sleet from gray clouds flow

All in all, there are emerging patterns
Warm up, rain, turns cold, colder then
One more cold night, rain clouds that turn 
The area warmer again

Date: January 17, 2023
Sponsor: Tania Kitchens
Contest: 12 Lines Of Rhyme-Winter Nature Themed

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Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 10:29 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful winter's write/story from the South. Enjoy your day with blessings................ Sara Kendrick January 25, 2023 at 12:16 PM Why, thank you, Paula. I appreciate you stopping by with cong. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler January 25, 2023 at 6:40 AM Congratulations on your win Sara! :) Sara Kendrick January 25, 2023 at 12:14 PM Thank you, Linda. SK

Tania Kitchin January 24, 2023 at 6:37 PM Sara, a creative winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest! Sara Kendrick January 25, 2023 at 12:12 PM Tania, Thanks for dropping by and letting me know that I placed in your contest. I appreciate you doing that. Sara

Valsa George January 23, 2023 at 3:58 AM Climate and weather are so unpredictable now. They keep changing. Some years back, we could predict the changes. But now with global warming everything is altered. Right observations dear Sara Sara Kendrick January 23, 2023 at 6:34 AM Valsa, You comments ring true with what the climatologists are saying. Your visits are always encouraging. Sara

Gershon Wolf January 21, 2023 at 7:14 PM So true, so true. Gives us some hope some winters, I say. Sara Kendrick January 22, 2023 at 2:24 AM Gershon, pouring rain as I type this. It has been pouring down for about 3 hours now. There are flashes of lightning, but thunder's answer is way, way off. Your visits are delightful. Sara

Jack Horne January 21, 2023 at 7:07 AM yes, such true observations, my friend - I know how much you love observing nature from your porch

Jennifer Proxenos January 20, 2023 at 9:02 PM Hi Sara this contest is right up your sleeve as you do love nature so much. All the best for a win, hugs and blessings Jennifer Sara Kendrick January 21, 2023 at 5:00 AM It wasn't so easy to write. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara

M. L. Kiser January 20, 2023 at 3:18 PM It's been a rather unusual one, one day in the 60's, the next day in the 30's. One never knows what to expect of the seasons anymore. Well-worded. Sara Kendrick January 20, 2023 at 3:31 PM M. L., Well I had thought that this year would be a little colder than last year and so far I have been right but it is not as cold as it has been from time to time in the past. Thanks for your kind review of my work. Sara

Jim Slaughter January 20, 2023 at 12:14 PM Sounds very much like Missouri in the last 20 years since I've been here. BOL in the contest, Sara. Sara Kendrick January 20, 2023 at 12:24 PM Jim, I think your area gets the weather before it comes to us, but sometimes what comes your way goes above us. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Joseph P. DiMino January 20, 2023 at 3:25 AM Sounds like Arizona, slightly above the desert~ I did see snow once in Phoenix on Christmas day. It was a blast. Good reflection for life in general I guess, the highs and lows, the chills and warmths. Very well written. Sara Kendrick January 20, 2023 at 4:22 AM Yes, Joe, the highs and lows of life. Sometimes it is daily for some people and for others like rise and fall of the tide. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

Joanna Daniel January 19, 2023 at 7:11 PM Sara, winter can be moody, I guess, you have described it well:) Sara Kendrick January 20, 2023 at 3:13 AM Thank you, Jo. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Susan Ashley January 18, 2023 at 5:34 PM Dear Sara, you capture the finicky nature of "winter in the south" with wonderful rhymes and lovely finesse. I live up north and I hate freezing rain and sleet... snow I like though.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Sara Kendrick January 19, 2023 at 3:07 AM I appreciate your visit, Susan. I don't see how people in the north make it through winter, but I guess you and yours are prepared for it. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Jenna Logan January 18, 2023 at 9:38 AM You're so right, Sara. When it hits 50, people reach for sweaters. lol Great analysis. Sara Kendrick January 18, 2023 at 1:03 PM Jenna, why thank you. It is 62 here now and I feel chilled, but it is much better than a few days back at 29. Sara

Victor Buhagiar January 17, 2023 at 11:06 PM We are in for a week of wind and rain. It's the wind I hate most though. All this after some beautiful days. Sara Kendrick January 18, 2023 at 3:30 AM Victor, Yes, the wind can really be disagreeable if one is outside in it. It can make it seem so much colder and if it is raining, pelt the body with chilling rain. Aren't those beautiful days wonderful in winter. Those little reprieves help to make winter more bearable. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Sotto Poet January 17, 2023 at 12:52 PM Sara, you have written an exquisite piece. I heard about the wind and storms in the south, and that several states were proclaimed disaster areas. I hope you are not impacted, and I wish you safety and well-being. Sara Kendrick January 17, 2023 at 2:16 PM Lasaad, The storm hit several areas to the west and north of us. We got wind and rain but no damage or destruction. I am seeing it on TV and feel for those that are hard hit. There were some injuries and deaths from the storm but not close to us. God took care of us during that time. Thanks for your concern. I appreciate you dropping by and the kind review of my work. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2023 at 7:57 AM - A lovely poem, Sara - Winter here is on and off with snow/rain... wet, cold and windy ... - hugs Sara Kendrick January 17, 2023 at 9:33 AM Anne-Lise, we are having a whole lot of wind this year as well. Some bad tornadoes last week. Scary to even think about. I feel for those people who lost lives in their family and those that lost all they own. Thanks for the visit. Sara