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HAIKU is the ' phonetical&cultural original 'in Japanese'

whereas

HIKU is the English language version(including translations)with similar economy of words without "telling all" thereby to ' show ' (conforming to the key to true imagist poetry),&to avoid 'as'&'to' & the use of past tense verbs (often without verbs,adverbs,adjectives )A verse freed from syllabic constraint within its triplicity

the tiles dusted with snow- trickle down rivulets fill the rain butt

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