Winter Fantasy - POTD

Winter Fantasy

I love to walk through twilight
In mountain hills
Breathlessly awaiting evening’s first
Flakes of snow in a winter carnival
That rowdy gathering clouds
Threatened to toss upon their upturned faces
And,
When at last, making merry, the storm releases
A snowy vision descending on a dreaming world
A lullaby of sweet calm
Transcends sleepless visions like twirling snowflakes
To fill nocturnal eyes
With visions of barren aspen arms
Embracing shivering jewels of glittering snow.

Between wind whipped flakes
I see
The warm and cozy lights of homes
Resting in the trees
To cast a revelry of amber shadows
On the pure whiteness
Of a crystalline blanket falling from the sky;
They hide their eyes
Among the spruce
As love
But
With inviting looks
Beckon me abide
As I pull my hands into warm sanctuary pockets
To walk upon the gala of snow serene.

In a carnival of swirling flakes of snow
My footsteps
Quickly
Lose their warmth –
Now  
Hidden by
My brumaled friends
As the evening sky
Slowly turns
Her dark side inside out
From
Turquoise to blue
To white.

And when the storm finishes
Emptying
The clouds
As feather pillows opened wide
The moon slow pulls herself
Above these hills in festival
To ride a winter sky
Watching over the silver
Shimmering earth
Alive with twinkling moonbeam stars
On outstretched limbs 
Of aspen trees –
They twinkle in a jubilee – bright reflections
Of a sister in the sky.

The air turns colder –
Cutting right to the very marrow core
With sharp and brittle winter bite
When the mountains
Glimmer cold as moonlight –
Blue as stars –
As 
They stand above the valley
Wearing alpine ermine furs
Sentinels of the day 
Now past –
Guardians of tomorrow
And 
Though they change their winter masks
For summer’s green masquerade
Their faces never change –
I would know them always!

1-1-21
Contest: Winter
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Brul Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 5:44 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved accolade Sam...Exquisitely beautiful!!!
Kauffman Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 1:10 PM
Thank you JCB! This poem was based on an actual walk in the mountains. It was an "exquisite" experience of sensory overload! So happy to have you walk with me through this wonderland! All the best.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on POTD Sam! xomo
Kauffman Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Many thanks Mo! Happy New Year! Hope you are cozy and warm as we get farther into the winter season! All the best!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
Kauffman Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Many thanks Kim. Happy New Year to you!
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 12:23 PM
- Congratulations so much on yours lovely p.o.t.d., Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Thank you my winter friend for your message and congratulatory words. They warm me in this season of rain, snow and ice! Stay warm and cozy! Blessings.
Wolf Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Brrrr. My feet are cold just thinking about all this. You certainly are a braver soul than I!!! Congratulations on POTD, Sam! Winter Wonderland, Gershon
Kauffman Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Must be my Scandinavian heritage! Looks like you are shoveling less snow and more leaves this year but definitely colder than here. We would like to be "shoveling rain!" Thank you so much Gherson for your visit, congratulatory message and taking the chance to walk in the snow! Time for a hot toddy with your feet warmed by a crackling fire in the fireplace! Happy New Year!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:50 AM
Marvellous poem. Congrats on your POTD. ~~
Kauffman Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 10:11 AM
Thank you Victor! So appreciate your visit and your words of congratulations! Hope you are doing well. All the best.
Watt Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:39 PM
Sam, nobody writes of winter like you do! A big blessing to see your snowy talents honored with a POTD today. Your artistic talents, descriptive word crafting and unique vision are on full display in this beautiful poem of winter. Congrats to you, dear friend!
Kauffman Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Thank you so much John. I have to admit the inspiration for this piece was the walk itself and the old song "Winter Wonderland! I have a framed copy of the sheet music in my office. Winter has a unique effect on me - maybe its the weather or spending so much time just watching or the time spent in the mountains. Thank you for sharing this "wonderland" with me dear friend! Epiphany blessings of light and revelation to you!
Faulkner Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:10 PM
Also wanted to add my congratulations for your stunning POTD :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Hi Michelle! Happy New Year! Thank you my friend! I so appreciate all of your support and your messages that me me up. Hope you are doing well. All the best! :)
Nicole Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:29 PM
Dear Sam, this is awe inspiring. I feel like I am there watching this scene unfold, and gracefully so. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Happy New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kauffman Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Happy New Year Brandy! Thank you for your message and your congratulations. I always love receiving your positive and uplifting words along with your perceptive comments. I kept thinking about the old song "Winter Wonderland" when writing this fantasy. It makes me happy that we could share it together. Sending you blessings for the new year dear friend!
Crabtree Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:31 PM
Great images for the season presented here, Sam. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~Angie
Kauffman Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Angela, thank you so much! While I love all the seasons, winter for me presents vivid images of contrasts. Many thanks for your message. Happy New Year!
La France Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:53 PM
Sam, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with this beauty _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Hi Constance. Happy New Year! Thank you for your congratulatory words and for sharing in this winter wonderland walk! Blessings to you!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on POTD win. A beautiful winter's day. Love where you say, "And when the storm finishes Emptying The clouds As feather pillows opened wide." Your snow and feathers made a wonderful picture. Enjoy your win. Today have joy /blessings..................
Kauffman Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Happy New Year Paula! Thank you so much for your message and congratulations - so grateful! This walk in the mountains was an amazing experience of serenity, colors and winter sensations. So glad you could enjoy it with me! Blessings on your day - joy and peace to you for the new year.
Downing  Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Wonderful imagery, Sam, and congratulations on potd
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Hi Akkina! So wonderful to hear from you. Many thanks for your uplifting message and your congratulations! Happy New Year!
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Sam, great imagery of winter in the forest. Congratulations on POTD, Hugs Eve
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Even with all of the cold and ice, winter in the forest is an amazing experience. Thank you for taking this walk with me - enjoyed your company! Sending you New Year's blessings! Hope you are doing well - back on your feet with pen in hand my friend.
Sands Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:24 AM
This is excellent Sam. I love the mountains and the beauty of winter in the mountains too. You have shown it so well with this beautiful poem. A FAV for me. Congratulations for POTD :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Happy New Year Heidi. I know we both love the mountains. That makes your message extra special! I get a little crazier if I don't have time to renew in the mountains every so often. So honored by your fav. Thank your for your message and your congratulations. They mean a lot to me. Hope you are doing well. All the best.
Logan Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 7:12 AM
This is so very lovely, Sam. Painted with the vision of a poet. Congratulations on potd.
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Thank you so very much Jenna. I am truly honored by your gracious message and by the POTD. It was a beautiful walk that still lives vividly in my memory. Hope you are doing well. New Year's blessings!
Jayasankar Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Very DESCRIPTIVE with great imagery and flow. Congrats on your POTD Sam Kaufmann ~ Ani
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Ani, thank you! The POTD was a complete surprise. I felt so honored. Thank you for walking with me through this wonderland of snow and moonlight in the mountains. All the best for the new year to you!
Pandit Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Wonderful imagery you created--congrats Sam on poem of the day.
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Thank you so much Vijay. I am honored by your gracious comments and your congratulations especially when I read your gorgeous imagery! Sending you New Year's blessings!
Kitchin Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:21 AM
A beautiful poem with gorgeous winter imagery, congratulations on POTD Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Thank you so much Tania! As I mentioned to Arturo, the poem is based on an actual walk through this wonderland after a snowstorm. The POTD honor was a complete surprise. HOpe you are doing well! Happy New Year!
Michael Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:08 AM
A lovely write...Congratulations Sam Kauffman on POTD. Well done.
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Happy New Year to you Arturo! Thank you for your gracious words and congratulations! This was a complete surprise. All the best for the coming year to you!
Edmonds  Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:55 AM
That’s really beautiful Sam, winter dressed in her glittery best. Congratulations on a well deserved poem of the day... Belle
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Happy New Year Belle! This poem is based on an actual walk in the mountains. It was so serene and very memorable! Thank you for your lovely message and congratulations! Happy New Year's blessings to you!
Mcintosh Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:15 AM
Congrats on POTD with this amazing poem. I love it - God B L E S S you
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Thank you so much Gina! Your messages always lift up my spirits! Thank you for that gift. New Year's blessings to you!
Koplin Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 4:41 AM
I agree with Jan, such vivid imagery. Well done Sam, Congratulations on POTD!
Kauffman Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Sending you gratitude for your lovely message. And, for your support! So grateful. Hope you are having a wonderful new year. Sending you all the blessings of this new year my friend! Happy New Year!
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 3:16 AM
what amazing winter imagery Sam, very beautifully penned and my congrats on a worthy choice for POTD:-) happy new year:-) hugs jan xx adding this gem to my faves and gl in the contest
Cunningham Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 12:34 AM
Back with congratulations Sam on POTD, a well deserved honour. Over Fork Over Tom
Kauffman Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 2:10 PM
Thank you so much Tom. This was an unexpected surprise and a delightful way to start off the new year. Happy New Year again! Over Fork Over!
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