Winter Crystalline

Nightingale's song fades in dawn's light Crisp Winter shadows dance with delight

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/27/2017 10:02:00 AM

Congrats Rick to win on this cute poem

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/25/2017 9:19:00 PM

Such a pretty visual! Congrats!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/25/2017 8:58:00 PM

A lovely crystalline, Rick! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2017 7:49:00 PM

Oh, here it is again. The one you did not get entered into my contest. So glad to see it again, Rick. Congrats on the awesome win with Brian.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2014 12:28:00 PM

Rick, I am just now seeing this one. It was not entered into my contest, was it? I never saw it in my box. that same thing happened with another poet. I saw they posted a "frozen" poem and it did not show up in my box. Yet I had all my 35 entries. I sure hope yours was not actually entered because that is not good if some of my entries are not coming to me. I really like your nightingale, I think birds make excellent subjects for poems like these.

Rick Parise
Date: 12/1/2014 9:11:00 AM

I forgot to enter it.......LOL - Have a great day Andrea!!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/23/2014 1:54:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..The ending does flow on the tongue..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I am delighted that you read and found my work worthy to be there..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/23/2014 3:33:00 AM

Wow lovely Rick! Love the nightingale's melody n then the winter shadow dance! Brilliant work! Gl in contest!

David Meade

Date: 11/22/2014 8:01:00 PM

I like the shadow dancers . . . nicely done!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2014 7:05:00 PM

Beautifully penned Rick - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx