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Written, December 28, 2024
Poetry/Quintain (English)/Winter Chickadee/AI Free
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Poem Of The Day, December 30, 2024

Submitted to the International Contest, Marathon, Mile 4, Mark Toney, BEAUTIFUL

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Winter Chickadee

 
Outside my window lives a chickadee, he loves snowy green pine, and has a family of about twenty-three; he loves the snow and falling snowflakes divine, and each morning the whole family sings for me. Sometimes they scatter on clamous whirling wings, off to a park nearby, my heart is sad for their songs are like violins; then, the beat of their wild swirling wings multiply, they have brought home many, many friends I sigh. On warmer days I bring them some seeds, I put the seeds on my hand, and am always in awe with their fluttering speeds; I love each created by God delicate painted band helping the birds helps me to grow and transcend. They huddle together when it is very cold, at times they lift a foot, I think God not only gave them beauty but a soul; each morning I must go to my window to have a look I find them twittering, and tweeting in a clamor bruit.
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Agustin Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 7:40 PM
Thanks for sharing this info about Chickadee, poetically expressed. God bless you.
La France Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 1:30 PM
Beata, thank you for the compliment and visit ~
Toney Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 11:47 AM
Constance, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (9). Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. It was lovely to see this Poem of the Day again. It's a FAV poem for me.
La France Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 2:13 PM
Mark, thank you for chosing my poem to be featured in your Flash Challenge, I love this poem too and thanks for the FAV ~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Constance, belated congrats on POTD! A beauty!!
La France Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the congratulatios on my POEM OF THE DAY honor and compliment~
M  Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 8:14 AM
Both the words and picture are just beautiful Constance… Congratulations on POTD my friend! Debx
La France Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Deb, thank you for the visit, comment, compliment and congratulations on my Poem of the Day ~
Hawley Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 8:51 AM
Congrats on your POTD yesterday. Thanks for the example on your contest.
La France Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Miranda, thank you for the congratulations on my POEM OF THE DAY honor, appreciate, hope you will give my contest a whirl ~
Eslinger Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Happy New Year Constance, i, too, am a devoted backyard bird watcher/feeder , LOVINGour sprite, sweet chickadees! We put suet out during winter. I can’t help but attempt writing about our birds often! Gid bless you!
La France Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 7:46 AM
Sally, thank you for the visit, lovely comment and compliment, God Bless ~
George Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 9:19 PM
Birds are such lovely creations of God. You are fortunate to have the sight of the lovely bird through your window every day. I too love watching birds. Your poem is able to create a sweet and tender feel in any one who loves birds. Let the Chickadee sit on the pine and sing for you everyday. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Dear Constance, wish you a New Year of joy and peace.
La France Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Valsa, thank you for the lovely comment, compliment and congratulations on my Poem of The Day honor, seasonings greetings ~
Nicole Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 6:55 PM
' I love each created by God delicate painted band. ' Me too, my dear friend. So beautiful are your thoughts, soft tender and uplifting, all at the same time. Congratulations Constance, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you in the new year. :) Hugs, Brandy
La France Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Brandy, thank you so much for the compliment, lovely comment, and congratulations on my Poem of The Day honor, hugs ~
Brul Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 5:17 PM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on POTD. Well-deserved. Happy New Year, dear Heart. ^__^ JCB
La France Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 6:14 AM
Jcb, thank you for the compliment and congratulations on my Poem Of The Day honor, Happy New Year ~
Toney Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 2:31 PM
As sparrows are dear to God, so too the chickadee. Your excellent powers of observation are evident in your poem’s detailed descriptions, Constance. “They huddle together when it is very cold, at times they lift a foot …” Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
La France Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 6:17 AM
Mark, thank you so much for the compliment and lovely comment, I love the chickadees and sparrows that are numerous outside my home, they are truly gifts from Heaven, and thank you for the congratulations on my POEM OF THE DAY honor ~
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December 30, 2024 at 12:46 PM
Excellent poem, deserving a POTD. Best wishes. Victor.
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Victor, thank you for the compliment and comment on my POTD, blessings ~
May Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 12:11 PM
Wonderful write Constance, Congrats on POTD, Happy New Year!
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:41 PM
Joseph, thanak you for the compliment and congrats on my POTD, Happy New Year ~
Bell Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 12:09 PM
Nature is all around us, and at times we take it for granted. Pigeons still love my car, mind you.
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:42 PM
Paul, thank you so much for the comment, yes pigeons, you either love them or hate them, I love them, I find them very soothing~
Goldsmith Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a wonderful "Winter Chickadee" write/story. I can see it before me. You are blessed to have this at your window. Enjoy your win. Have a Very Blessed New Year 2025.....................
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:43 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations on my POEM OF THE DAY honor, and the nice comment, blessings ~
Slaughter Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 9:27 AM
I like the view outside your window, Constance. Congrats on POTD and Happy New Year!
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:44 PM
Jim, thank you so much for the congratulations on my POEM OF THE DAY honor a the comment, appreciae and Happy New Year ~
Read Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 8:09 AM
Loved reading your poem Constance congratulations on POTD God bless. xx
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:46 PM
John, thank you so much for the congratulations on my POEM OF THE DAY honor and compliment ~
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December 30, 2024 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations, Dear Poetess, I truly enjoyed your enchanting poem about the Chickadee and his family. I often enjoy watching birds and their twittering sounds sublime to me - I understand how you feel every morning. Wish you a very Happy New Year, Dear Constance!
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:47 PM
Mala, thank you so much for the congratulations on my POEM OF THE DAY honor, and for the compliment and lovely comment, Happy New Year ~
Alex Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:43 AM
"I think God not only gave them beauty but a soul" - Wow! What a beautiful line! How you have cherished the beauty of the Chickadee! The entire poem is very enchanting. Congratulations! I wish you a very happy New Year!
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the congratulations on my POEM OF THE DAY honor and for the compliment and lovely comment, Happy New Year, nice to see a pic of you !
Gifford Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Back again to say Congratulations on your POTD win, my friend. Have a great day.
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:06 AM
Zyrool, thank you so much for the congratulations, I am so proud this made POEM OF THE DAY ~
Tor Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Congratulations Constance on receiving such a high honor. Your Chickadee's would also be happy for you that they were the subject of your award. Hugs...
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Michael, thank you so much for the congratulations, I never imagined this poem would make POEM OF THE DAY, so delighted, hugs back ~
Elliott Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 4:09 AM
A most beauteous bird poem POTD, Constance. Very lovely, a big Congratulations. Enjoy your special poetry day. Happy New Year!
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:11 AM
Gina, thank you for the congratulations on my POTD and the compliment, Happy New Year ~
mysore Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 3:37 AM
Congratulations on POTD dear poet. Cheerful dee..
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:12 AM
Thriveni, thank you for the congratulations on my POTD and compliment ~
Greenhough Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 2:42 AM
Furthermore, congratulations on POTD.
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Hilda, thank you for the congratulations on my POTD ~
Andresen Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 2:39 AM
- Congratulations, Constance :) - hugs
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you for the congratulations on my POTD, hugs ~
Jones Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 2:07 AM
What a lovely view you have as well as a great potd! Congratulations Constance!
La France Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Karen, thank you for the congratulations on my POTD and the compliment ~
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