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Winter Cave

WINTER CAVE In the dark, hearken to the swooshing trees. Everything varies in the ebon-light. Squirrels and foxes do not collaborate. The swirl of red fur and the howl of coyotes like dancing of the Northern lights. Artificial illumination inside the Winter cave. Television-dusk relaxes the limbs and a wall-switch electrifies my dreams, as the ceiling stars bid goodnight. 10/16/2019

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Date: 10/17/2019 1:58:00 PM
Love they way you transitioned this one. Very, very meaningful. Such boldly honest verse is quite rare, truth be told. Bravo, Kim! Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2019 7:56:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 10/17/2019 7:52:00 AM
Nicely done. You had me with this, the ending was unexpected but wonderful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2019 8:32:00 AM
Glad I surprised you, my friend! Thank you!
Date: 10/16/2019 9:49:00 PM
Stars, so beautiful glimmering across the sky (even inside). Wonderfully descriptive poem that I love. God bless you with many more. Love and prayers, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Gina :)

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