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Winter Blues

A meter off the ground - it was chilling to the bone and they say high up the degrees drop In a metal bird with conditioned air forgotten are dreams of wanting to fly I closed my eyes -      could sleep fast-forward eight months? we stepped down at the other end of the universe The Earth was wearing white trees clinging on to green in the middle of this I stood very blue the sun turned bleak, gave into cold all time spaced out last day seemed old summer had waned - and for ever, it seemed frosting fell before my eyes, crystallizing tears salting snow nothing stays pure for long I was stuck in a snow globe, wishing the white was pixie dust (you can take home away from a person, you can’t take hope out of them) They say new years let grow new hope but withering winds breed fear alone impatience in its veins and shoulders shaking a spiritless shadow trailed * * * * * * * the ghost of a snowflake settles on my glove cold touch of a memory

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Date: 6/25/2023 8:08:00 AM
Hello, Sneha! Wonderful to meet you rgrough this lovely, descriptive poem. I am now a follower! Bravo for this poem! sally
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Date: 5/5/2018 9:33:00 PM
Lovely poem, Sneha. Belated congrats on your top win.
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Date: 3/12/2018 9:25:00 AM
You had me mesmerized from start to finish. Exceptional writing.
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Date: 3/4/2018 8:49:00 AM
Absolutely spell bound poetry with vivid imagery. Could feel the pulse of your well versed poetry. Skill in performing tasks like poem is found. Your Poetry is plucking at the heartstrings. Review Pari Style Poem to encourage me.
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Date: 2/5/2018 2:13:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Sneha very well deserved win my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2018 9:30:00 PM
Magic! Cold, sad, beautiful. Full of hope.
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Date: 2/8/2018 7:19:00 AM
That is a lovely comment, thanks so much :)
Date: 1/18/2018 8:29:00 AM
This is beautiful, Sneha. Travelling to another far off part of the world can be a cultural or climatic shock for many; in your case it was an inspiration to write. Love the final three lines. Congrats on your fine win ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/8/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thanks so much! I am glad you think so.. :)
Date: 1/13/2018 2:00:00 PM
A beautifully emotional and sadly stirring poem Sneha. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/17/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thanks so much for your visit and lovely comments!
Date: 1/13/2018 12:44:00 PM
Gosh Sneha your emotions about leaving your home shout out from every line. thanks so much for sharing this powerful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thank you dear Jan, very glad you think so! :)
Date: 1/13/2018 4:01:00 AM
so sadly beautiful, great poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/17/2018 9:26:00 AM
Thank you very much for your nice contest and my placement!! I am so glad you liked my poem. Sorry for the late reply :)
Date: 1/12/2018 8:32:00 AM
Special moments that kindle the imagination and stir the heart are what make life worth living. You captured a personal moment in time and shared it with us all. Emile.
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Date: 1/17/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thanks for your beautiful comment! I am glad you think so :)
Date: 1/11/2018 7:09:00 AM
Love the images, you being "blue", "spiritless shadow", just to name a few. Nicely penned.
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Date: 1/17/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks a lot for mentioning that, appreciate your comment :)
Date: 1/10/2018 6:05:00 PM
wow, that experience really affected you and inspired a very fine poem for the contest, Sneha.
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Date: 1/17/2018 9:32:00 AM
Thanks very much dear Andrea :)
Date: 1/10/2018 8:21:00 AM
This poem feels deeply contemplating..a discourse of winter blues and search for hope..well written..best for a win, Sneha.
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Date: 1/10/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, I have added a note below :)

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