Winter Blues

A meter off the ground - it was chilling to the bone
  and they say high up the degrees drop 

In a metal bird with conditioned air
  forgotten are dreams of wanting to fly

I closed my eyes -        could sleep fast-forward eight months?
we stepped down at the other end of the universe

The Earth was wearing white     trees clinging on to green
         in the middle of this   I stood   very blue

the sun turned bleak,   gave into cold  
 all time spaced out    last day seemed old 

summer had waned -  and for ever, it seemed

frosting fell before my eyes, crystallizing tears
    salting snow                nothing stays pure for long

I was stuck in a snow globe,   wishing the white was pixie dust  
(you can take home away from a person, you can’t take hope out of them)

They say new years let grow new hope
but withering winds breed fear alone             


impatience in its veins  and  shoulders shaking



a spiritless shadow trailed  






           * * * * * * *

the ghost of a snowflake 
  settles on my glove
 
     cold touch of a memory
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Eslinger Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Hello, Sneha! Wonderful to meet you rgrough this lovely, descriptive poem. I am now a follower! Bravo for this poem! sally
Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Lovely poem, Sneha. Belated congrats on your top win.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:25 AM
You had me mesmerized from start to finish. Exceptional writing.
Jain Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Absolutely spell bound poetry with vivid imagery. Could feel the pulse of your well versed poetry. Skill in performing tasks like poem is found. Your Poetry is plucking at the heartstrings. Review Pari Style Poem to encourage me.
Allison Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 2:13 PM
dropping back with my congrats Sneha very well deserved win my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Magic! Cold, sad, beautiful. Full of hope.
Rv Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:19 AM
That is a lovely comment, thanks so much :)
Callus Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 8:29 AM
This is beautiful, Sneha. Travelling to another far off part of the world can be a cultural or climatic shock for many; in your case it was an inspiration to write. Love the final three lines. Congrats on your fine win ~ Regards // paul
Rv Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Thanks so much! I am glad you think so.. :)
Ashley Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:00 PM
A beautifully emotional and sadly stirring poem Sneha. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
Rv Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Thanks so much for your visit and lovely comments!
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Gosh Sneha your emotions about leaving your home shout out from every line. thanks so much for sharing this powerful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Rv Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Thank you dear Jan, very glad you think so! :)
Scars Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 4:01 AM
so sadly beautiful, great poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Rv Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Thank you very much for your nice contest and my placement!! I am so glad you liked my poem. Sorry for the late reply :)
Pinet Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Special moments that kindle the imagination and stir the heart are what make life worth living. You captured a personal moment in time and shared it with us all. Emile.
Rv Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Thanks for your beautiful comment! I am glad you think so :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Love the images, you being "blue", "spiritless shadow", just to name a few. Nicely penned.
Rv Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Thanks a lot for mentioning that, appreciate your comment :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:05 PM
wow, that experience really affected you and inspired a very fine poem for the contest, Sneha.
Rv Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Thanks very much dear Andrea :)
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 8:21 AM
This poem feels deeply contemplating..a discourse of winter blues and search for hope..well written..best for a win, Sneha.
Rv Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Thank you so much, I have added a note below :)
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