Kim Rodrigues Poet Shadorma

Winter Blanket

in life’s pause
                    when boots are kicked off
               snow drifts, melts
          the hearth blooms
     with its blanket flower flames
toasty toes chill out


1/21/2022

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Dennis Spilchuk January 23, 2022 at 5:49 AM A pleasant wintry relaxing atmosphere expressed in Shadorma form. Nicely done. Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2022 at 12:19 PM Thank you! I’m loving this form! Brief forms are fun!

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 22, 2022 at 7:58 PM Flower flames! How lovely, Kim. This is delightful to read when it's so bitter cold outside. :) Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2022 at 8:15 PM And there really exists blanket flowers! Thank you :)

Paulette Calasibetta January 22, 2022 at 9:36 AM Making the most of winter in a delightful Shadorma! Love it! Blessings, Paulette Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2022 at 9:43 AM Thank you so much, Paula!

Paul Callus January 22, 2022 at 6:29 AM A delightful poem which seems to say: "Winter is not so bad, after all!" Warmth is all you need. ~ Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2022 at 9:42 AM We can delight in the cold if we can find ourselves back in the warmth of our home. I think that is exhilarating. :) ~ hugs

Victor Buhagiar January 22, 2022 at 1:15 AM I wonder why I never used a winter blanket. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2022 at 6:16 AM :)

Kim Merryman January 21, 2022 at 9:26 PM A vivid winter scene! Great shadorma, Kim! Blessings, Kim M Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2022 at 6:16 AM Thank you!

Valsa George January 21, 2022 at 8:14 PM "the hearth blooms with its blanket flower flames".... Love the poem altogether especially these two lines ! Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2022 at 6:17 AM Thank you, Valsa!

Vijay Pandit January 21, 2022 at 3:55 PM Sounds like a plan, Kim. No better time than now-- to relax in front of the warm fireplace. Its 21 degrees and going down fast--where I am in Maryland. Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2022 at 5:30 PM Wow! Stay warm, my friend!

Debra L Brown January 21, 2022 at 2:42 PM Enjoyed the poem Kim, It's 17 degrees here in West Virginia. My choice of blanket is electic. Stay warm, Hugs ~Debra Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2022 at 5:35 PM Great choice, an electric blanket! Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2022 at 5:31 PM Great choice, an electric blanket!