Winter

Winter flows down mountain slopes,
beneath a mantle of mist,
whispers a soft lullaby,
while trees dream of spring.


11/06/2015

seasonssnowLullabydodoitsu

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Sara Kendrick

November 19, 2015 at 5:39 PM

Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Gary Watkins

November 25, 2015 at 4:47 PM

Thank you, Sara. I am happy you liked it.

Skat A

November 14, 2015 at 7:49 AM

Gary, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

Gary Watkins

November 14, 2015 at 12:14 PM

Thank you, Skat. I love trying new forms.

Kim Merryman

November 13, 2015 at 8:37 PM

I like this, Gary! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Gary Watkins

November 14, 2015 at 12:13 PM

Thank you, Kim. I hope it made you smile.

Barbara Gorelick

November 13, 2015 at 3:09 PM

Congrats on a nice win..I love the trees dreaming. BG

Gary Watkins

November 14, 2015 at 12:12 PM

Thank you, Barbara. I'm glad you liked it. We just got snow here a few days ago, so it turned out to be a timely poem.

Jan Allison

November 13, 2015 at 2:51 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Watkins

November 14, 2015 at 12:11 PM

Thank you, Jan. Hugs back to you! Gary

Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

November 8, 2015 at 5:18 AM

hi, this is a really lovely dodoitsu; there have been many good ones for the contest, but this is one of the nicest i've seen - i love that last line! thanks for your comment, can i tempt you with a haibun? i see that you like trying new forms!

Gary Watkins

November 8, 2015 at 10:41 PM

Well, you never know, Charlotte. I might have a haibun in the oven, so to speak.