Winter

Winter flows down mountain slopes, beneath a mantle of mist, whispers a soft lullaby, while trees dream of spring. 11/06/2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2015 5:39:00 PM

Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Gary Watkins
Date: 11/25/2015 4:47:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. I am happy you liked it.

Skat A

Date: 11/14/2015 7:49:00 AM

Gary, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

Gary Watkins
Date: 11/14/2015 12:14:00 PM

Thank you, Skat. I love trying new forms.

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/13/2015 8:37:00 PM

I like this, Gary! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Gary Watkins
Date: 11/14/2015 12:13:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I hope it made you smile.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/13/2015 3:09:00 PM

Congrats on a nice win..I love the trees dreaming. BG

Gary Watkins
Date: 11/14/2015 12:12:00 PM

Thank you, Barbara. I'm glad you liked it. We just got snow here a few days ago, so it turned out to be a timely poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2015 2:51:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Watkins
Date: 11/14/2015 12:11:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Hugs back to you! Gary

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/8/2015 5:18:00 AM

hi, this is a really lovely dodoitsu; there have been many good ones for the contest, but this is one of the nicest i've seen - i love that last line! thanks for your comment, can i tempt you with a haibun? i see that you like trying new forms!

Gary Watkins
Date: 11/8/2015 10:41:00 PM

Well, you never know, Charlotte. I might have a haibun in the oven, so to speak.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/7/2015 5:22:00 PM

beautiful imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 4:04:00 AM

I have just written mine last night - I will post it later:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Watkins
Date: 11/7/2015 8:43:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. This was my first doditsu. I enjoy trying out new forms on the Soup.