Winter

Winter is when snowflakes are falling Winter is when snowstorms come calling Winter is when the world becomes white Winter is warm fireplaces at night Winter is snowangels and snowmen Winter can turn us into slow men Winter's a cup of hot chocolate And a lot of within-the-house-dates Winter is life inside a snow globe Sweaters and mittens and woollen robes Winter is when nature hibernates Cardinals sing and we buy ice skates In winter, the heat's never enough But we need winter to make us tough.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/1/2024 9:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Winter" write. I would love a cup of your hot chocolate. Have a blessed day................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/1/2024 7:52:00 AM

Love the imagery Jo. I especially like the snow globe line Congratulations! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2024 9:18:00 PM

Gosh, I like this one so much. Congrats on your well-written poem on winter. A few super cute lines in this one such as those last few couples. They were great concluding lines.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/16/2024 5:22:00 PM

a lovely list poem, Joanna. You captured the positive aspects of winter...and I liked that. I especially liked 'winter is life inside a snow globe' Beautiful image. Best wishes with the contest, Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/16/2024 5:17:00 PM

Dear Joanna, You have beautifully captured the essence of the season with your vivid imagery and heartfelt nostalgia. Each line evokes a sense of warmth and coziness, while also acknowledging the challenges that come with the cold. I love how your words remind us to cherish the simple joys and find comfort in the midst of winter’s chill. Thank you for spreading a little warmth in the coldest of seasons. - Blessings, Daniel

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/16/2024 9:24:00 AM

Great list, Jo! Indeed we do need winter. I love the way you highlight both the positives of winter like hot chocolate, ice skating, cardinals and warm firesides along with the challenges of cold and snowstorms. Well done! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 3/16/2024 4:58:00 AM

A good description of Winter. Well done.