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December- 15- 2023

Winter Haiku Poetry Cintest

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

draped in milky white
of soft dazzling silk, land lies~
winter queen enthroned.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2023 5:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement on the winner's list in Tania's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Len Gasun

Date: 12/25/2023 10:14:00 PM

A splendid winter haiku my dear poet friend Valsa. I love it. Thanks for sharing! Big Congrats on your win! Have a joyful Christmas to you and your familty. Blessings to you always! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 11:37:00 AM

Ohhh what a beauty.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/24/2023 12:31:00 PM

Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/24/2023 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "winter" is a beautiful write/lovely winter picture. Merry Christmas...........

Bill Baker

Date: 12/16/2023 10:11:00 PM

I like the imagery in your winter scene Haiku, Valsa. Good luck in the contest, my dear friend. Have a pleasant weekend. Bill

Paul Callus

Date: 12/16/2023 8:07:00 AM

Your lovely imagery definitely suits your winter queen, Valsa! Hope you'll charm and dazzle the sponsor of this winter contest:) Regards // paul

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2023 12:39:00 PM

Awesome imagery my friend.. I really got winter vibes here.. this one should do really well in the contest.. love the choice of words..

Jay Narain

Date: 12/15/2023 10:35:00 AM

Nice poem. GL in contest.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/15/2023 6:34:00 AM

You have painted a vivid and enthralling scene with your words, dear Valsa. Your poetic prowess is resplendent in an opulent gown emanating with transcendent luminosity. The unfolding terrain in front of us is graceful, invoking feelings of grandeur and awe. The winter season, embodied in the form of a majestic queen, reigns supreme, evoking reverence and wonder.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/15/2023 5:58:00 AM

Such a pretty write. May you ascend to the poetic throne. Best of luck in the contest.

Karen Jones

Date: 12/15/2023 12:16:00 AM

Love the word choice. Your photo is nice too. Good luck in the contest.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/14/2023 10:49:00 PM

Wow, this is one of the best takes I've read for this contest... Gosh, I'm swooning over your delicate wordsmithery and how elegantly you've streaked brushstrokes of divine imageries here! "draped in milky white", "soft dazzling silk", "winter queen enthroned" This truly reminds me of the movie Frozen and queen Elsa!!! Your wordplay stands out in the most ethereal way here, because these word combinations are just surreal and so profound.. Honestly, a FAV for me, dear poetess :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/14/2023 9:53:00 PM

Brrr, I must admit she creates a beautiful tapestry on the landscape but I look forward to the Queen of springs return. Good luck Valsa. Tom

Ink Empress

Date: 12/14/2023 9:14:00 PM

This is absolutely stunning and so royally divine how descriptive you’ve gone in few syllables. Your poems whether haiku or long, are my faves, because they flow seamlessly and you have a very creative way of describing things, I especially love “ draped in milky white“ and the last line too! Profound haiku. Picturesque. I hope this will do well in the contest, best wishes always: sending you light dear valsa

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