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December- 15- 2023
Winter Haiku Poetry Cintest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

 

winter

draped in milky white of soft dazzling silk, land lies~ winter queen enthroned.
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Kendrick Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations on your placement on the winner's list in Tania's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Gasun Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 10:14 PM
A splendid winter haiku my dear poet friend Valsa. I love it. Thanks for sharing! Big Congrats on your win! Have a joyful Christmas to you and your familty. Blessings to you always! Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Ohhh what a beauty.
Kitchin Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "winter" is a beautiful write/lovely winter picture. Merry Christmas...........
Baker Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 10:11 PM
I like the imagery in your winter scene Haiku, Valsa. Good luck in the contest, my dear friend. Have a pleasant weekend. Bill
Callus Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Your lovely imagery definitely suits your winter queen, Valsa! Hope you'll charm and dazzle the sponsor of this winter contest:) Regards // paul
One Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 12:39 PM
Awesome imagery my friend.. I really got winter vibes here.. this one should do really well in the contest.. love the choice of words..
Narain Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Nice poem. GL in contest.
Poet Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 6:34 AM
You have painted a vivid and enthralling scene with your words, dear Valsa. Your poetic prowess is resplendent in an opulent gown emanating with transcendent luminosity. The unfolding terrain in front of us is graceful, invoking feelings of grandeur and awe. The winter season, embodied in the form of a majestic queen, reigns supreme, evoking reverence and wonder.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Such a pretty write. May you ascend to the poetic throne. Best of luck in the contest.
Jones Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 12:16 AM
Love the word choice. Your photo is nice too. Good luck in the contest.
Sharma  Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 10:49 PM
Wow, this is one of the best takes I've read for this contest... Gosh, I'm swooning over your delicate wordsmithery and how elegantly you've streaked brushstrokes of divine imageries here! "draped in milky white", "soft dazzling silk", "winter queen enthroned" This truly reminds me of the movie Frozen and queen Elsa!!! Your wordplay stands out in the most ethereal way here, because these word combinations are just surreal and so profound.. Honestly, a FAV for me, dear poetess :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 9:53 PM
Brrr, I must admit she creates a beautiful tapestry on the landscape but I look forward to the Queen of springs return. Good luck Valsa. Tom
Empress Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 9:14 PM
This is absolutely stunning and so royally divine how descriptive you’ve gone in few syllables. Your poems whether haiku or long, are my faves, because they flow seamlessly and you have a very creative way of describing things, I especially love “ draped in milky white“ and the last line too! Profound haiku. Picturesque. I hope this will do well in the contest, best wishes always: sending you light dear valsa
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