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Winter

Winter is on it's way Ice to skate on not clay Nice day to go out and play The huge clouds are all gray Even the sun took off the day Rain and snow is here to stay
Date Written: 11/29/2021
Note: Acrostic Rhyme
BITE SIZE POEM no28 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/22/2021 9:24:00 PM
Lovely acrostic with great rhyming ! Really enjoyed the winter scene and the spirit it induces... !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2021 8:29:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my winter write. Have a Blessed Christmas.................
Date: 12/2/2021 5:38:00 AM
So well done dear Paula... The rhymes perfect and a beautiful winter acrostic... Best wishes for the contest dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/2/2021 10:55:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this winter acrostic write. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 12/1/2021 2:50:00 AM
Nicely done Paula...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/1/2021 7:50:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 11/30/2021 2:02:00 PM
Paula, In my eyes, it seems to be a strong candidate for the contest. I hope you have enjoyable wintertime. Thank you for taking the time to look over my page.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/1/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this wintertime write. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 11/30/2021 12:44:00 PM
Nothing can be more beautiful than this bit size composition wrapped in winter! Natures glory at its' peak! It's winning winter.... Silpika
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/1/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my bit size write. I like spring much better. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 11/30/2021 10:15:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. I hope your winter is a good, happy one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/30/2021 12:08:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun "Winter" write. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 11/30/2021 9:54:00 AM
A happy write!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/30/2021 12:07:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Acrostic Rhyme write. Have a blessed day..................
Date: 11/30/2021 9:04:00 AM
Oh Paul, how I wish we could go back to our youth and play like innocent children. your poetry is light hearted and beautiful. Like you :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/30/2021 12:06:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. Yes, if we could go back to being kids. Have a blessed day..................