Winter

birds silent on trees fogs cover them in white shawls ~ leaves seem to shiver 07 November 2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2021 3:54:00 PM

I love how you pictured this . We can really "see" it.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/9/2021 11:38:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/8/2021 7:49:00 AM

Christuraj, your haiku is breathtaking! Blessings, Paulette

Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/8/2021 8:05:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/7/2021 12:11:00 PM

Hello Christuraj Alex, some birs do nt fly south for winter. So they are in the bare trees. Leaves on the ground not raked do shiver. Enjoy your day my friend. Blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/8/2021 10:48:00 AM

Hello Alex, you are welcome Hugs.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/7/2021 11:55:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/7/2021 7:40:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku :)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/7/2021 8:26:00 AM

Thank you very much.