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Winter- Collaboration With Joanna Daniel

Hi Winter, how we feel your icy touch! The earth remains under your freezing clutch. The trees stand huddled in the numbing cold. And the sun has lost its bright sheen of gold. From nowhere comes the song of any bird. On slopes, one cannot sight the grazing herd. Piles of snow lie heaped on the barren ground. Whole of Earth lies in a sea of ice drowned! Snow swirls down in flurries of soft whispers. The winter wind wails, whistles and whimpers. All creatures for warmer climes are yearning. In our houses, fires are warmly burning. Skiing and sledding and building snowmen, Winter's time to become children again. Thank you for reminding us with hue white, Sometimes we too need, from work, a respite. March 28.2023 ~ Placed Third~ Collaborate with Me Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joanna Daniel Rhyme Scheme- aabb and ccdd Syllable Count 10 syllables per line. (HMS)

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Date: 4/1/2023 11:15:00 AM
Absolutely an amazing collaboration poem by two very talented poetes. A sterling beauty of winter indeed! Warmest Congratulations on your shining win my dearest poet friend Valsa! Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 3/30/2023 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your winning write. A winter beauty!
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Date: 3/30/2023 7:51:00 AM
Hi Valsa, You and Jo wrote a fine collaboration. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/30/2023 7:36:00 AM
Sweet win Valsa. Perfect combo. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/30/2023 6:21:00 AM
I love winter so much and this one spoke to me, Valsa, great poem and win, congratulations:) loved working with you:)
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Date: 3/30/2023 6:14:00 AM
Very well expressed! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/29/2023 4:07:00 PM
Hello Valsa, you did this winter poem very well. It is spring here now, Yet winter wants to stay a while longer. blessongs my friend./Darlene\
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Date: 3/29/2023 5:26:00 AM
Beautiful Valsa, a lovely poem for Jo to finish. Well done.
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Date: 3/28/2023 9:24:00 AM
Great flowing poem, love it , so gracefully put together: )
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Date: 3/28/2023 3:39:00 AM
Great atmosphere building in this one Valsa
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Date: 3/28/2023 3:24:00 AM
So cold! This is VERY descriptive, Valsa. Made me cold reading it. Great to see you back:)
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Date: 3/28/2023 3:07:00 AM
Very descriptive work you have penned in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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