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Winsome Visage of Spring

Where hyacinths bloom, cardinals hop and sing, Winsome is the visage of verdant vibrant spring Beautifying fragrant prairies, blossoming trees, Alluring bees waltzing on wings of tender breeze Undulating gleefully crest of burbling streams, Frolicking on melodies of robin’s nesting dreams, Euphoric in hilarity of dancing yellow daffodils, Merriment of white lilies, panorama of foothills, Spring’s revelry buoying where butterflies spree, An eagle’s flight above marveling splendorous glee. May 3, 2022 Placed 2nd: Spring Rhyme: 8-12 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/10/2022 6:52:00 PM

Congratulations on this beautiful spring poem placing second Vijay. Gorgeous imagery. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/15/2022 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love flowers, cardinals and this write. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2022 12:57:00 PM

Vijay, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful Spring poem, beautiful Spring imagery!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/9/2022 9:13:00 PM

A vividly descriptive delight, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/13/2022 1:09:00 PM

Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/5/2022 11:46:00 PM

This is so joyful Vijay! It lifts my heart! <3 ~BJ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2022 7:22:00 AM

Much appreciate, BJ. Many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/4/2022 4:08:00 PM

Such an expressive, vividly descriptive piece for spring, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/5/2022 4:12:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/4/2022 6:18:00 AM

It is the exaltation of poetry, my friend, Vijay. A Fave for me. Blessings!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/4/2022 8:41:00 AM

That is a high compliment coming from you my friend. Honored by your feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/4/2022 5:33:00 AM

Such a wonderful poem is automatically a fave for me. You captured the deep essence of spring and adorn it with a Vijay special touch of stunning rhythm. I think this should be a POTD.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/4/2022 8:39:00 AM

I certainly appreciate your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks for your kind remarks, as always. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Anil Deo

Date: 5/4/2022 1:20:00 AM

Great, a fave. But did u use iambic pentameter? The opening lines have a classic. Poetry - rhythm / Melody?

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/4/2022 8:38:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your complimentary feedback and especially your FAVE, Anil.

Valsa George

Date: 5/4/2022 12:57:00 AM

Lovely, lovely..... Simply lovely ! Into my Fav.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/4/2022 8:35:00 AM

Much appreciate, Valsa. Honored by a FAVE from you. Many thanks my friend.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/3/2022 4:18:00 PM

I am in complete awe with, "bees waltzing on wings of tender breeze, an eagle’s flight above." Along with, "blossoming trees." Oh yes, this is "verdant vibrant spring." Beautiful in every way, my dear friend. Your words caress the page with elegance and grace. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2022 5:29:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend for your supportive comments. You always take the time to write insightful remarks. Much appreciate, Brandy. I feel the goodwill of your smiling heart.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/3/2022 3:03:00 PM

I really enjoyed this poem! So many nice lines. A Fave for me :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2022 5:27:00 PM

Glad to read your comments Heidi. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your support, as always.

Bill Baker

Date: 5/3/2022 11:56:00 AM

Very rhythmic spring poem with a nice sprinkling of alliteration, Vijay. Great contest entry! I enjoy the uplifting read. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2022 5:26:00 PM

So very kind of you Bill. Many thanks for stopping by with your thoughtful feedback.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/3/2022 6:17:00 AM

I am sure this will get first place. Such imagery and visions of spring ae delightful. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2022 5:25:00 PM

Can't thank you enough for your vote of confidence, Victor. Much appreciate your kind feedback.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/3/2022 5:50:00 AM

You captured the beauty of spring well Vijay, lovely to see the landscape turning colourful again. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2022 5:25:00 PM

Thank you Tom. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Much appreciate your kind remarks.