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Winsome Visage of Spring

Where hyacinths bloom, cardinals hop and sing,
Winsome is the visage of verdant vibrant spring
Beautifying fragrant prairies, blossoming trees,
Alluring bees waltzing on wings of tender breeze
Undulating gleefully crest of burbling streams,
Frolicking on melodies of robin’s nesting dreams,
Euphoric in hilarity of dancing yellow daffodils,
Merriment of white lilies, panorama of foothills,
Spring’s revelry buoying where butterflies spree,
An eagle’s flight above marveling splendorous glee.

May 3, 2022
Placed 2nd: Spring Rhyme: 8-12 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/10/2022 6:52:00 PM Congratulations on this beautiful spring poem placing second Vijay. Gorgeous imagery. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/15/2022 8:41:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I love flowers, cardinals and this write. Have a great/blessed day....................... Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 5/14/2022 12:57:00 PM Vijay, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful Spring poem, beautiful Spring imagery! Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 5/9/2022 9:13:00 PM A vividly descriptive delight, Vijay! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/13/2022 1:09:00 PM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/5/2022 11:46:00 PM This is so joyful Vijay! It lifts my heart! <3 ~BJ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/7/2022 7:22:00 AM Much appreciate, BJ. Many thanks.

Janice Canerdy Date: 5/4/2022 4:08:00 PM Such an expressive, vividly descriptive piece for spring, Vijay! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/5/2022 4:12:00 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/4/2022 6:18:00 AM It is the exaltation of poetry, my friend, Vijay. A Fave for me. Blessings! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/4/2022 8:41:00 AM That is a high compliment coming from you my friend. Honored by your feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet Date: 5/4/2022 5:33:00 AM Such a wonderful poem is automatically a fave for me. You captured the deep essence of spring and adorn it with a Vijay special touch of stunning rhythm. I think this should be a POTD. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/4/2022 8:39:00 AM I certainly appreciate your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks for your kind remarks, as always. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Anil Deo Date: 5/4/2022 1:20:00 AM Great, a fave. But did u use iambic pentameter? The opening lines have a classic. Poetry - rhythm / Melody? Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/4/2022 8:38:00 AM Thank you my friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your complimentary feedback and especially your FAVE, Anil.

Valsa George Date: 5/4/2022 12:57:00 AM Lovely, lovely..... Simply lovely ! Into my Fav. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/4/2022 8:35:00 AM Much appreciate, Valsa. Honored by a FAVE from you. Many thanks my friend.

Brandy Nicole Date: 5/3/2022 4:18:00 PM I am in complete awe with, "bees waltzing on wings of tender breeze, an eagle’s flight above." Along with, "blossoming trees." Oh yes, this is "verdant vibrant spring." Beautiful in every way, my dear friend. Your words caress the page with elegance and grace. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/3/2022 5:29:00 PM Thank you my dear friend for your supportive comments. You always take the time to write insightful remarks. Much appreciate, Brandy. I feel the goodwill of your smiling heart.

Heidi Sands Date: 5/3/2022 3:03:00 PM I really enjoyed this poem! So many nice lines. A Fave for me :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/3/2022 5:27:00 PM Glad to read your comments Heidi. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your support, as always.

Bill Baker Date: 5/3/2022 11:56:00 AM Very rhythmic spring poem with a nice sprinkling of alliteration, Vijay. Great contest entry! I enjoy the uplifting read. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/3/2022 5:26:00 PM So very kind of you Bill. Many thanks for stopping by with your thoughtful feedback.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/3/2022 6:17:00 AM I am sure this will get first place. Such imagery and visions of spring ae delightful. Best for a win. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/3/2022 5:25:00 PM Can't thank you enough for your vote of confidence, Victor. Much appreciate your kind feedback.

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/3/2022 5:50:00 AM You captured the beauty of spring well Vijay, lovely to see the landscape turning colourful again. Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/3/2022 5:25:00 PM Thank you Tom. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Much appreciate your kind remarks.