Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Winsome Visage of Spring

Where hyacinths bloom, cardinals hop and sing,
Winsome is the visage of verdant vibrant spring
Beautifying fragrant prairies, blossoming trees,
Alluring bees waltzing on wings of tender breeze
Undulating gleefully crest of burbling streams,
Frolicking on melodies of robin’s nesting dreams,
Euphoric in hilarity of dancing yellow daffodils,
Merriment of white lilies, panorama of foothills,
Spring’s revelry buoying where butterflies spree,
An eagle’s flight above marveling splendorous glee.

May 3, 2022
Placed 2nd: Spring Rhyme: 8-12 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Connie Marcum Wong June 10, 2022 at 6:52 PM Congratulations on this beautiful spring poem placing second Vijay. Gorgeous imagery. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith May 15, 2022 at 8:41 AM Congratulations on your win. I love flowers, cardinals and this write. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Tania Kitchin May 14, 2022 at 12:57 PM Vijay, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful Spring poem, beautiful Spring imagery!

Janice Canerdy May 9, 2022 at 9:13 PM A vividly descriptive delight, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit May 13, 2022 at 1:09 PM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley May 5, 2022 at 11:46 PM This is so joyful Vijay! It lifts my heart! <3 ~BJ Vijay Pandit May 7, 2022 at 7:22 AM Much appreciate, BJ. Many thanks.

Janice Canerdy May 4, 2022 at 4:08 PM Such an expressive, vividly descriptive piece for spring, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit May 5, 2022 at 4:12 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 4, 2022 at 6:18 AM It is the exaltation of poetry, my friend, Vijay. A Fave for me. Blessings! Vijay Pandit May 4, 2022 at 8:41 AM That is a high compliment coming from you my friend. Honored by your feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet May 4, 2022 at 5:33 AM Such a wonderful poem is automatically a fave for me. You captured the deep essence of spring and adorn it with a Vijay special touch of stunning rhythm. I think this should be a POTD. Vijay Pandit May 4, 2022 at 8:39 AM I certainly appreciate your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks for your kind remarks, as always. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Anil Deo May 4, 2022 at 1:20 AM Great, a fave. But did u use iambic pentameter? The opening lines have a classic. Poetry - rhythm / Melody? Vijay Pandit May 4, 2022 at 8:38 AM Thank you my friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your complimentary feedback and especially your FAVE, Anil.

Valsa George May 4, 2022 at 12:57 AM Lovely, lovely..... Simply lovely ! Into my Fav. Vijay Pandit May 4, 2022 at 8:35 AM Much appreciate, Valsa. Honored by a FAVE from you. Many thanks my friend.

Brandy Nicole May 3, 2022 at 4:18 PM I am in complete awe with, "bees waltzing on wings of tender breeze, an eagle’s flight above." Along with, "blossoming trees." Oh yes, this is "verdant vibrant spring." Beautiful in every way, my dear friend. Your words caress the page with elegance and grace. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit May 3, 2022 at 5:29 PM Thank you my dear friend for your supportive comments. You always take the time to write insightful remarks. Much appreciate, Brandy. I feel the goodwill of your smiling heart.

Heidi Sands May 3, 2022 at 3:03 PM I really enjoyed this poem! So many nice lines. A Fave for me :) Vijay Pandit May 3, 2022 at 5:27 PM Glad to read your comments Heidi. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your support, as always.

Bill Baker May 3, 2022 at 11:56 AM Very rhythmic spring poem with a nice sprinkling of alliteration, Vijay. Great contest entry! I enjoy the uplifting read. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Vijay Pandit May 3, 2022 at 5:26 PM So very kind of you Bill. Many thanks for stopping by with your thoughtful feedback.

Victor Buhagiar May 3, 2022 at 6:17 AM I am sure this will get first place. Such imagery and visions of spring ae delightful. Best for a win. Vijay Pandit May 3, 2022 at 5:25 PM Can't thank you enough for your vote of confidence, Victor. Much appreciate your kind feedback.

Tom Cunningham May 3, 2022 at 5:50 AM You captured the beauty of spring well Vijay, lovely to see the landscape turning colourful again. Tom Vijay Pandit May 3, 2022 at 5:25 PM Thank you Tom. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Much appreciate your kind remarks.