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Winnipeg From 30 000 Feet

WINNIPEG FROM 30 000 FEET Flight over the Lakes - turbulent altogether: Wingtips alarmingly shaken like sticks. In the Manitoba prairie’s settled weather Pilot finds his clear-night city-fix. Winnipeg’s rarely thought of as pretty; But now working girl’s out for the night: On starless ground twinkles diadem city - A shining shimmering glorious sight. We glide and gaze at her regal art - Roads of diamonds in rows enthreaded : O’er the star-shaped city’s heart - Royal necklace, black velvet embedded. Down on earth this girl’s no cutey; Seen by heaven - she’s a beauty. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (City of Winnipeg, Manitoba, seen around midnight from a high flying jet.) Entered in Debbie Guzzi's contest

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Date: 1/19/2012 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Debbie's "City Lights" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2012 5:38:00 AM
very lovely sonnet with a wonderful ending! congrats on the win!
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Date: 1/18/2012 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Sidney. A very enjoyable read.
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Date: 1/17/2012 9:35:00 AM
Yup yup MUCH better! Light & Love
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:53:00 PM
Ok you devil you are moved up into the next category now my dear think of another 2 lines for verse 2 this wants to be a sonnet! Light & Love
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