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Winnie and Rabbit

Winnie the Pooh
And his friends, Rabbit being among them too,
Know that honey is Pooh’s fixation and regular delight,
Eats too much, gets stuck in Rabbit’s front door, a true blight!

Rabbit
Is a fusspot and has an obsession to lead, in fact a habit,
He pushes hard to release our bear, an impossible chore,
Tells Pooh he eats too much honey, Pooh blames his tiny door!

Poem Entry : Cleritoons Poetry Concert
Sponsor : Joseph May
Dated: 2021/09/11

Copyright © Jennifer Proxenos | Year Posted 2021

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Debra L Brown Date: 11/14/2021 8:44:00 PM I use to love reading... A.A. Milne, Winnie the Pooh, to my son when he was young. This was a very nice poem, I enjoyed it ~ Debra Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/6/2021 1:25:00 PM Enjoyed reading this one. I remember a little about Winnie and Rabbit. I know too much could not have caused his weight problem though because one can't eat too much honey. LOL..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 10/2/2021 12:54:00 AM Loved pooh sticks with my grandchildren..still do if I get the chance Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/28/2021 5:16:00 PM the last line is so cute on this one!!! BIG congrats for your wonderful win, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2021 5:17:00 PM what cute poems Jennifer, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/27/2021 5:02:00 AM LOL, I'm smiling recalling the books I loved so much. Lovely write, my friend. Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 9/20/2021 3:14:00 PM Too cute Jennifer. Gotta love Winnie. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/20/2021 1:07:00 PM Lovely and funny at the same time. Best for a win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/19/2021 11:40:00 AM Adorable and charming, Jennifer. There was a movie about a man grown up who goes back to his childhood retreat, the land of Winnie the Poo. Wish i remembered its name but it was so nice, like your clerihew here. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 9/18/2021 12:32:00 PM Wow! Jenny, You composed an excellent entry for the contest theme. You were spot on describing each one, and this should do well in the contest. Best wishes in the contest;-)Alexis Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/12/2021 6:07:00 PM So delightfully done, Jennifer. Exactly how I remember Pooh's adventures. Thanks! ~ Gershon Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 9/12/2021 4:20:00 PM Hello Jennifer ... delightful description of a childhood memory of these characters - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/11/2021 8:19:00 PM You rose well to the challenge Jennifer, used to love watching those cartoons I still do. Hope you're well Tom Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 9/11/2021 5:12:00 PM A lovely depiction of these characters; great write! Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2021 2:16:00 PM Humorous write--truly in the spirit of characters that take us back to fun times. Splendidly done, Jennifer. A winning poem. Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 9/11/2021 1:34:00 PM Such a fun and clever write on two good friends, like the humor on the last line the best! Should do well in the contest, I'd think~ Login to Reply