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Winnie and Rabbit

Winnie the Pooh And his friends, Rabbit being among them too, Know that honey is Pooh’s fixation and regular delight, Eats too much, gets stuck in Rabbit’s front door, a true blight! Rabbit Is a fusspot and has an obsession to lead, in fact a habit, He pushes hard to release our bear, an impossible chore, Tells Pooh he eats too much honey, Pooh blames his tiny door! Poem Entry : Cleritoons Poetry Concert Sponsor : Joseph May Dated: 2021/09/11

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Debra L Brown

Date: 11/14/2021 8:44:00 PM

I use to love reading... A.A. Milne, Winnie the Pooh, to my son when he was young. This was a very nice poem, I enjoyed it ~ Debra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2021 1:25:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one. I remember a little about Winnie and Rabbit. I know too much could not have caused his weight problem though because one can't eat too much honey. LOL..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 10/2/2021 12:54:00 AM

Loved pooh sticks with my grandchildren..still do if I get the chance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 5:16:00 PM

the last line is so cute on this one!!! BIG congrats for your wonderful win, Jennifer.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2021 5:17:00 PM

what cute poems Jennifer, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 9/27/2021 5:02:00 AM

LOL, I'm smiling recalling the books I loved so much. Lovely write, my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/20/2021 3:14:00 PM

Too cute Jennifer. Gotta love Winnie. God Bless, JB

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/20/2021 1:07:00 PM

Lovely and funny at the same time. Best for a win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2021 11:40:00 AM

Adorable and charming, Jennifer. There was a movie about a man grown up who goes back to his childhood retreat, the land of Winnie the Poo. Wish i remembered its name but it was so nice, like your clerihew here.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/18/2021 12:32:00 PM

Wow! Jenny, You composed an excellent entry for the contest theme. You were spot on describing each one, and this should do well in the contest. Best wishes in the contest;-)Alexis

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/12/2021 6:07:00 PM

So delightfully done, Jennifer. Exactly how I remember Pooh's adventures. Thanks! ~ Gershon

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/12/2021 4:20:00 PM

Hello Jennifer ... delightful description of a childhood memory of these characters - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/11/2021 8:19:00 PM

You rose well to the challenge Jennifer, used to love watching those cartoons I still do. Hope you're well Tom

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/11/2021 5:12:00 PM

A lovely depiction of these characters; great write!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2021 2:16:00 PM

Humorous write--truly in the spirit of characters that take us back to fun times. Splendidly done, Jennifer. A winning poem.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/11/2021 1:34:00 PM

Such a fun and clever write on two good friends, like the humor on the last line the best! Should do well in the contest, I'd think~