Jennifer Proxenos Poet Clerihew

Winnie and Rabbit

Winnie the Pooh
And his friends, Rabbit being among them too,
Know that honey is Pooh’s fixation and regular delight,
Eats too much, gets stuck in Rabbit’s front door, a true blight!

Rabbit
Is a fusspot and has an obsession to lead, in fact a habit,
He pushes hard to release our bear, an impossible chore,
Tells Pooh he eats too much honey, Pooh blames his tiny door!

Poem Entry : Cleritoons Poetry Concert
Sponsor : Joseph May
Dated: 2021/09/11

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Debra L Brown November 14, 2021 at 8:44 PM I use to love reading... A.A. Milne, Winnie the Pooh, to my son when he was young. This was a very nice poem, I enjoyed it ~ Debra

Sara Kendrick October 6, 2021 at 1:25 PM Enjoyed reading this one. I remember a little about Winnie and Rabbit. I know too much could not have caused his weight problem though because one can't eat too much honey. LOL..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Brian Strand October 2, 2021 at 12:54 AM Loved pooh sticks with my grandchildren..still do if I get the chance

Andrea Dietrich September 28, 2021 at 5:16 PM the last line is so cute on this one!!! BIG congrats for your wonderful win, Jennifer.

Jan Allison September 27, 2021 at 5:17 PM what cute poems Jennifer, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne September 27, 2021 at 5:02 AM LOL, I'm smiling recalling the books I loved so much. Lovely write, my friend.

Judy Ball September 20, 2021 at 3:14 PM Too cute Jennifer. Gotta love Winnie. God Bless, JB

Victor Buhagiar September 20, 2021 at 1:07 PM Lovely and funny at the same time. Best for a win.

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2021 at 11:40 AM Adorable and charming, Jennifer. There was a movie about a man grown up who goes back to his childhood retreat, the land of Winnie the Poo. Wish i remembered its name but it was so nice, like your clerihew here.

Alexis Y. September 18, 2021 at 12:32 PM Wow! Jenny, You composed an excellent entry for the contest theme. You were spot on describing each one, and this should do well in the contest. Best wishes in the contest;-)Alexis

Gershon Wolf September 12, 2021 at 6:07 PM So delightfully done, Jennifer. Exactly how I remember Pooh's adventures. Thanks! ~ Gershon

Lindsay Laurie September 12, 2021 at 4:20 PM Hello Jennifer ... delightful description of a childhood memory of these characters - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay

Tom Cunningham September 11, 2021 at 8:19 PM You rose well to the challenge Jennifer, used to love watching those cartoons I still do. Hope you're well Tom

M. L. Kiser September 11, 2021 at 5:12 PM A lovely depiction of these characters; great write!

Vijay Pandit September 11, 2021 at 2:16 PM Humorous write--truly in the spirit of characters that take us back to fun times. Splendidly done, Jennifer. A winning poem.

Michelle Faulkner September 11, 2021 at 1:34 PM Such a fun and clever write on two good friends, like the humor on the last line the best! Should do well in the contest, I'd think~